I really enjoyed your story. It was so sad when Tauriel started to fade. I am so glad that Legolas put aside his pride for his friend.
Ending a bit of a cliffhanger. Can't wait to read the next part!

Ah, it’s so sad!

Oh no, Tauriel, don’t agree to Legolas’s terms!

Aww, I’m glad Kili got a chance to save her this time.

Oh no, Kili’s declaration was cut short. Dragons spoil everything!

Haha, Fili, your plan to save Kili from embarrassment by sending away witnesses is going to backfire, I’m afraid.

This is wonderful.

You are a good artist

If only! This is what I wish could have happened for them!

Really quiet good story

Absolutely perfect ending to this chapter of their story. I have thoroughly enjoyed reading this story. Thank you.

That was riveting to say the least. I like that they are both uncertain as to where they are to head. It feels like the reader is as much on a journey to the unknown as they are.

That was beautiful

There you go and produce another fantastic chapter. I love the dream connection Kili and Tauriel are able to share asa symbol of the strength and unique power behind their love. I feel for Fili, a lot.

Gripping. absolutely gripping.