true saiyans after chapter 11 would destroy earth in revenge and to show the power's who's boss

Well, this was just a fun story. What's more fun than some Saiyan rage monsters mixing it up with demons and Jaffa? Not much. well done, and thanks for sharing.

Well darn! It was getting REALLY good and I was wanting to see how the SGC planned to contact the 3 'beings' since they have no real idea who they are, or what. Buffy is gone, but how do the 3 break the news of their changes to the others? What will they do with the hatak? I know it's been a while but I hope you add to this story someday.

really badly written, plot is also weak. 3 'weak' saiyans winning against god lvl demons with magic... but the worst part is the repeating which is the worst part like so, its also because of this that the story spans a wopping 2hours in 73k

only to reappear in front of lenny and his flunkies. the vamps were startled by their reappearance so close to them that they didnt react in time to defent themselves.
this is a mouthfull and very tedious to read, you repeat yourself and make senteces wayyy to long. so far half the story is from sg-1 and is word for word from canon

Was wondering if you had any more of this hiding under your hat... I'm curious as hell to see if Jenny ends up in charge of Apothis' realm and if they knock boots!

This chapter made the characters pick up the idiot ball. Why would Dawn believe for a second that that was actually Buffy and not a trick by the Powers to make her do what they want? Especially with that timing? And they're Saiyans now, everyone they know is quite possibly crippled, considering their memories and how their personalities have changed, why did not one of them tell the demons that if they don't step down and let them revive Buffy that they'll take who they care about up to the ship and blow the planet up? If this is the direction the story was ending up going I'm glad you ran out of inspiration, that way I can remember this fic as decent rather than a descent into shit.

...you killed off buffy...

eff them not jeff

I'd be going after the powers that be now. Jeff them they are all dead.

Write yourself into a corner? Cool.

Cowardly Saiyans? Cool.

Interesting story, although it was my understanding that it was Magically pulling Buffy's soul from the afterlife that caused the repercussions due to all major magic having consequences in BTVS, even though WR&H use a spell like that to bring back Darla with seemingly none besides the dead magic users, which still confuses me seeming they don't want 'The First' around either from memory.

Not having a go at the story just curious

I miss this. A lot. So, I'm gonna ask that horrible question that no author likes to hear, are you going to continue this? Please? Well, thanks for writing what you have of it, and bye for now.

Damm Buffy killed off by the Powers that Be. Dawn Falling back towards Earth. Powerful ending to this chapter. Hope the muse returns soon to add more...