Joy it's a cliffhanger... *sarcasm* Well this is just amazing... Anywho away from my bad sarcasm and stuff I just want to say I really like this story. I don't often read about OCs with special powers and stuff because they often become Mary Sues but when I read this story it actually turned out really well. I really like the story and I also really hate cliffhangers so if you could update that would be awesome! I realize you haven't updated in years which means you are probably really busy or are having a hard time but if you could possibly try to get in some time to write another chapter that would be great. Please update soon!

I know it's been roughly 2 years since you've last updated but I just read this and love this story so much and you have such talent as a writer, and I hope you consider finishing it please! It's so good! Thanks

Woah! :O Never expected this!

nice name but weird way to request something though... great start!

Please update I have been waiting for quite a few months and really enjoy the story

Update please!

This is an amazing story I wanted to ask if you had room or more OC's

Great to are another chapter after so long. Don't really have any criticism.
Keep up the good work.

Cheers, Mac Gustah

I love this story! Please update soon!

Awesome! I love this chapter! Keep up th awesome work.

Great chapter! I'm excited to see what happens!

By the flying spaghetti monster! You're back! Of's good to finally see another chapter, even if there's so much time in between them.
Keep up the good work and don't stop dancing! And start wearing hats, like a fez. Or a tophat. Or a cowboy hat.

Cheers, Mac Gustah

Ok, if you do not want to do this story I understand and you shouldn't force yourself to do something you hate. But I liked this chapter and I am interested in what's happening next.

You're writing so well, keep it up

Don't delete it! D: This is a really good story.