Reviews for Unrequited Desire
RomanticRed chapter 1 . 8/2/2019
I really wish either the author would continue this, or someone would adopt it.
SamsaraMorningstar chapter 7 . 12/10/2017
I like how this was going, please update
Hisoka chapter 7 . 5/13/2017
Please Update! This is a great story and I would love to read the completed result.
dontusethissiteanymore chapter 7 . 10/8/2016
You're British!
Guest chapter 7 . 9/26/2016
Will you ever continue it?
Guest chapter 1 . 12/2/2015
Pleeeeaaaase continue this! I don't know if you have the devilish writer's-block, if you're busy, or if you have some problems going on. But I do know that this story is AWESOME, and very well put together! You have plenty of people that support you, so go for it! I'm one of those extremely silent readers who enjoy people's work from the sidelines, and boy did you WORK. I would love to see how this story progresses and how Naruto is able to deepen his relationship with Kakashi. I hope I've inspired you enough to keep on writing this story! Best of luck to you!
sidebabe chapter 7 . 7/8/2015
Please update this is a really good story and your writings are really good I am a huge fan. Can't wait till the update!
seriousfan chapter 7 . 7/7/2015
#serious fan of ur naruto x kakashi work.
Please update ur work i'm dying over here with impatience, I really like your writings of Naruto and Kakashi. My favorites would be this one and surprise Mistake. I also like you'd like it Kakashi-sensei. Your stories are really well written and interesting. I'm a huge fan Please update. #1 FAN
Mirage chapter 7 . 4/4/2015
interesting Story
but it Shows that guys really are slow and somewhat stupid...why do this two stupid itiot not seethat they like each other, and Kakashi is an older and perv he should know more, and to say he cant be with Naruto because he is still 13 is no excuse...i mean they started Training to become killer with 9 to 11 years and have there first outside Mission with 11-12years where they still have the high risk for first killing.
So when they are trained too kill with 12 years why cant they also drink or have sex?
strange...i think killing is a stronger Impact for a growing teen as sex...but i may be wrong who knows how there Society works.
And that Kashi thinks Naruto feels not the same when they where more or less humping each other the day in the forest...
He really should change soon and simple pull Naru to bed, and put Sasuke in his place...trying to kill Naru and making the same goey eyes at him like sakura does to sasuke strange, i did think the only think sasuke ever did want was to kill his brother he never had time for anything else less then Little interest as sex.

so i hope that kakashi becomes a adult or older teen rival maybe from an other clan...who Shows interesed in naruto and maybe he a bit in the Person too maybe then kakashi Shows some Backbone and hot male blood in his Body and reacts...
oh and do you know what would be funny, when the writing from hinata was a recipe for something kakashi loves

i hope you come back soon and write more chapters i cant wait to read where your Story goes
Killin chapter 7 . 11/10/2014
More chapter pls this is good...
fvjhmnhi chapter 7 . 7/7/2014
Uh, Sasuke... sounds like a creepy/funny Orochimaru. :D
Nice story so far! A little fluff... 3 Followed
unlikey yaoi paring chapter 7 . 5/27/2014
I really like this one I can't wait until the new chapter you are going to any chapter I also like the one where Naruto had a baby but you have been updated it
I hope you do cuz I can't wait to read it
ThousandxSunny chapter 6 . 4/24/2014
hmmmmmm i had this weird weird thought that the situation in the tent was gonna lead to something ;) ;) and omg kakashi using the shadow clone...i thought he was dreaming...man...he's such a genius... XD
Gaara'sYaoiLover chapter 7 . 4/19/2014
Amazing story I can't wait for the next chapter please update soon
yukihime88 chapter 7 . 4/11/2014
what is up with sasuke? he's creeping me out!
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