This is just flat out incredible. The weaving of Greek myth and the painfully drawn descriptions of Lydia's life and pain. I could easily feel the crown burning on my head as I read, and the desperation as she searched for him. You just drew her amazing depth so beautifully. Well done!

That was beautiful. Like, one the best written fics I've ever read, no joke. It was gorgeous, and I loved it (obviously).

This is incredibly beautiful! Love, love, love it. :)

That was fantastic! I love your writing style, it's so beautiful. And the idea of this story is just superb, and you executed it so well. Great job!

Oh look like te dark stiles and Lydia is hitting it off :3

Oh my god that was beautiful to read.

This is gorgeous. Its so well planned and the metaphors are beautifully put together. It feels like an episode of TV and I love love love how you write Lydia :)

There were moments reading this where I just had to stop and try and register the pure beauty and power of your writing. You managed to describe feelings in writing that literally made my heart heavy in my chest. I think I cried a few times throughout. The description of how Stiles' absence feels, like a physical presence, was one of the most shocking passages I've ever read. It hit me like a train. This whole damn story literally just smacked me off my feet. I am blown away.
Fanfiction or not, you have written something truly original and beautiful here, and I really hope you continue to write in your future because it is a gift to the world.

I don't frequently describe things as beautiful, but this is it. I'm in love with your writing style.