Way to short it was just getting to the good part lol.

Love the story!

sweet

Very sweet and nicely done?

A very satisfactory Severus/Harry story. They could have been more enthusiastic in the last chapter. And Sev stepping back ? Actually could be "normal" under the circumstances I suppose. I guess they seemed more like good friends than a new romantic couple.

Nice

love it!

Aw...Okay, normally I don't really like Sev/Harry fics but this one was perfection. It's really good, and if you would make an epilogue of their trip to Egypt it would be cool. Absolutely love the story. Don,t stop writing. You're really talented. Bye!

Gag.
Honestly, you need to work on your story telling. Move away from the cliches, excessive dialogue, and happily-ever-afters.
I also notice that you're a teller and not a shower - something in the writing community that just spells novice.
It's the same with all of your fictions. And the sad part is, all of your fictions are practically the same. Don't you find it exhausting writing the same thing over and over again?
I suggest finding a new idea to work with; a new genre; new characterization; etc.

it s a beautiful story!

D'aww, that was so sugary sweet, I think my teeth may rot.

It was beautiful. Thanks for sharing :-)

Beautiful

still not a fan of slash, but quite nicely done. Good work!

Such a short story and we never really learned why he was in a wheelchair in the first place. But it was still a delightful story. I loved the fact that he asked Minerva for the dance.