Cant wait to read more! thank you!

In my previous review I mentioned the whole love triangle dynamic with Bella Jacob and Alex what I meant in regards to its importance wasn't just for the story's sake but for the characters them selves because from what I read Jacob and Alex already seems to like each other which leaves little to the imagination of them fighting there feelings much longer and ending up together but had there even been a small period of Jacob preferring Bella then it would have given the whole relationship more drama maybe even Alex would let Jacob go and explore other options until Jacob saw how great she was. I'm just a little scared as to how this will play out because although Ik where all suckers for a good relationship pairing we also have to believe and understand just how much there willing to go to show that their care or love the other person the obstacles of it all and if it comes to easy then I'm sure we'll be happy but it will feel a little flat when there finally together.

I definetly loved this story, sure most of it was pretty much a rehash of the original twilight but Alex really did add some flare to it, she was bold brave hilarious and yet feisty But loyal I like her. I loved her relationship with Bella they were close enough to help each other but not so much that there weren't any teasing involved and also how they came together with the vampire revelation saying what Edward was together it was really cute ,I kind of get annoyed when story's pin Bella against her "sister" or family members just because she's obsessed with Edward so I'm glad that didn't happen here. although I'm a huge Jacob fanatic I couldn't help but feel then need to want to ship Alex and Emmett there interaction felt more romantic to me then platonic big brother stand in imo I don't know if that was intentional or not I actually kind of thought at first that he would bring Alex to the dance to kind of help Alex relive her image of him and Edward expect with her but I guess that wasn't meant to be lol. I know the whole Jacob Bella drama was stated to not be involved in this story but I still feel like there should still be at least a hint of it considering that's what pretty much shapes the foundation of the franchise and the story and the core reason for Bella's warm state in new moon after Edward leaves, I guess we'll just have to see how the story pans out but this was really good here's to an amazing sequel. :)

“Why didn’t she realize I had questions too?” Because she’s stupid and selfish

Also I like how this is supposedly a Jacob/OC story but we’ve seen him a total of two minutes

I would have straight up ditched Bella and gone to a church, good luck with your crush I wanna live

Good story

love your style.

Can I just say how refreshing it is to read a story where the writer doesn't make Bella out be a bitch, and actually get along with the sisiter. REASON WHY I AUTOMATICALLY FAVED YOUR STORY

P.S 'asshat' is an amazing comeback. PURE GOLD I'll add it to my list of comebacks right under 'douche-nozzle'.

Okay i liked your story but why call it a Jacob/oc story if they only have like 3 scenes together? i was thoroughly dissapointed because i was looking for a Jacob/oc fanfic.

Thanks! I read this whole story in two hours... I'm a fast reader... I blame fanfiction. XD cya in the future!

Edwards probably having a blast reading Alex's mind :'D

Haha! I started reading "Falling skies" and just as I read the first chapter I was like:
"Hey, this doesn't seem right... Why skip an entire first book and not give any backstory?" Totally confused and than I checked your profile and was like. "OOOOOOHHH! Now it makes total sense!"

Haha! You seem like serious writer :D Like it :D

I just started reading your story and MAN! YOU HAVE GOT ME HOOKED!

I like it!

how is this a Jacob/OC when there's nothing about them in it you have basically retold the story adding in a character nothing new has happened ?