I hope you decide to finish this and I hope that Castle doesn't let her off the hook to easily.

This version of Kate isn't really worth the time or the effort.

I don't think I would give a rat's ass what her reasoning was, this is one of those situations where sorry isn't going to cut it.

It always amazed me how easy it was for Beckett to lie whenever the situation suited her.

Sometimes "I'm sorry " isn't enough

Oooh who is Eric?! Dun dun dun! Can't wait to find out... great writing.

When are you going to do the next chapter.

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Really enjoyed what there is. Wish there were at least one more chap, but understand.

Hi!

This is a great story with a very interesting premise :) I don't think I've seen one like this before; it has a lot of potential to develop.

I would recommend, though, perhaps finding a betareader to look over your chapters before you publish them. I think it could help a lot :)

Keep trying and keep improving!

-Soph

ooh very good!

house hold
a custom
bed ,
...to come in."
startled(,)
whats(?)
...and bring Castle."
..don't know."

If you want followers, spend more time proofreading your work prior to submission. Otherwise, you will lose their interest with the spelling and punctuation errors.

Loved it.

Five chapters and less than 2000 words in 8 1/2 months, is so annoying for what is now at last a fascinating idea.

These dribbles of information at the end of each chapter are maddening especially as basically nothing else gets done. This story could and should be great but I fear that the slowness of the updating and the shortness of each update will mean too many will have given up a long time before the story progresses to a point when the reader can understand the authors idea.

I know it is AU, but unfortunately one heck of a lot has happened in the show since the author started to make this story less than different.

Needs to be updated quicker and with the story progressing a lot quicker than a drop every 400 words.