This needs work. The grammar is atrocious, the spelling is all over the place, there is absolutely no real character development, we're expected to know everything that happens to percy, naruto doesn't show effort or even real emotion. When ares held salina hostage, he showed a bit of anger, power and then was perfectly fine. No exhaustion, no sweat, just perfectly fine. In canon, percy expressed strain and tiredness from exerting too much power until he grew into them, in canon, naruto bled for his techniques, well, he did until the last bit where 6 path sage mode was just straight handed to him. In this it's like hes not even trying. And if he is the same age as percy, as he was in the same grade and class as percy, he is 12. 12. You wrote lemons about a 12 year old. A 12 year old with a harem. In lightning thief, Clarisse and Selina were, iirc 14 or 15. I try not to write hate in my reviews, I try to be polite, but 12 year olds shouldn't be having sex, they should be trying to figure out what's going on with them as their bodies are starting to prepare for puberty. You need to work on your characters, your grammar and your story. I am sorry I'm leaving you a flame review and I ain't trying to come off as some internet bully, but dude. The idea and premise is great and I love when Clarisse is used as main(ish) character, the idea behind 3 goddess' merging their blood with minato's life blood is incredibly new and different and I loved it, but this work needs an overhaul.

This reminds me of the story of the lighting theft

Are you going to update this

when will the next on come out

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are you still writing this series because it has been awhile

Does Naruto know that Grover is a satyr and that Mr Brunner is Chiron? If not why would he tell Chiron about being a demigod, having three goddesses for mothers and going to camp halfblood ? Did he just guess? Did he ever see a fury before to know what Ms. Dodds was?

Aren't they all 12? Why are they already fucking eachother?

its a shame we may never see more of this series.

I Hope you can start on the next Book soon I have really enjoyed it.
Thanks for the good read.
Singard.

it will continue?

this book was amazing hope to see the next if you do one

Omg! I love this story. Please put up a second book out soon.

This story is good I can't wait for the next story also I was wonder can you make a reading versions of this story so that the greeks gods read what is happening along some people that is from the future like the wives and child of naruto, his father, I think that it so please and thank you.

la suite d naruto fils des trois déesses vierges livre un:le voleur de foudre merci