Reviews for Fireflies in the Dark
Katsheswims chapter 5 . 5/3/2006
This is a great story! Are you using real Indian words or making them up? Sometime you have to tell us what embarrassing thing Kagome said. I can't wait for the next chapter!
ash chapter 5 . 4/7/2006
i have just read ur fic and its very good and i looked at ur update on it and its been a while since u put a new on in. i am putting this story in my favoitres list so i am hoping u would wtire another chapter soon.
Inugurl27k chapter 4 . 3/14/2006
why have you stoped? its really good! im dying to know what happens! please write more!
Sarah Jo chapter 5 . 3/2/2006
I really really love this story. You shouldn't be so hard on yourself, it's great! I know real life can get in the way, but I do hope this eventually gets updated. I would be forever grateful _
Dark lady fox chapter 5 . 1/9/2006
Please continue the story I have been a faithful fan for a few years waiting for more of this story you have a good fic going. If you would like any editing help or anything, I would be glad to help but please continue!
Ithilwen K-Bane chapter 5 . 11/28/2005
Ah, the only chapter I've not yet reviewed.

(Holds up lighter)

This is quite possibly the best doomed-to-remain-unifinished Yash 'fics I've ever read, and I've read very many. People move on. Real life intervenes. Fandoms die down. This is still a great 'fic.
Kitty chapter 5 . 11/19/2005
hey, you need to finish this story i really like it MORE CHAPTERS!(please)
ApAtHy aNgEl chapter 5 . 11/14/2005
Two whole yaesr since your last update. (gets out machine gun)

does your free liscence to beat you still stand? YOU HAVE GOT TO UPDATE!
Inugurl27k chapter 5 . 10/29/2005
This story is awsome! what happens next? you must tell me! miroku is going to get himself kiiled. we all know inu is going to do him some serious damage... kaggie was smart though, not wasting all her energy tring to swim with her dress. she would have tried out quickly and inu would have found her unconcious. keep up the exelent work and i hope to hear from you soon! Ta!
little stuffs chapter 5 . 10/21/2005
Wai!

! MYA!

I kind of liked dark fics too! Even though its a cliffy, I can't wait but I know I can wait!

Post up as soon as you can but don't hasten too much!
inu-yu818 chapter 5 . 10/13/2005
This is a great story so far... keep it up. I hope you post soon. i've been waiting for quite some time. Anyways great story and hope you post soon!
MarcellaRyoko chapter 5 . 9/11/2005
OMG OMG OMG!

MES LOVES THIS STORY LOTS ANDS LOTS ANDS LOTS!

"YAYS!"

But...bu-bu-but WHY, OH WHY AREN'T YOU FINISHING IT!

I've NEVER, EVER read a story quite like this...and well, no one has really made a fic about Indians.

The way you've made this, it is VERY well-done...

I want more!

Please, OH PLEASE update soon!

I know it's been like, a few years and all, but you couldn't have just forgotten about your outline!

PRETTY PLEASE?

LOVES YAS!

-Me
Destiel500 chapter 5 . 9/10/2005
oh my god! that was such an awesome story! why did u not update. it's so unique i'm just craving for more. i can't wait for the next chapter!
t a y e k i m chapter 5 . 9/4/2005
I guess I get a license to beat you because you haven't updated for over two years! TWO! hurry up! I have a feeling you've already given up on this but if you care about your readers, please update.. curse you. If you weren't such a good writer then I wouldn't have to complain... POST!
Shayla chapter 5 . 8/30/2005
Awesome story would love it though if u finished it thanks
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