Reviews for Incipient
Krystallianna Bragynski chapter 4 . 6/5/2019
I really like this story, I hope you update soon!
StellarMage99 chapter 4 . 8/9/2018
Oh no! I wonder how Lavi will react! Will he stick around and help Allen even he never remembers him or leave Allen all alone again? :(
Maria will certainly be upset. I look forward to future chapters
Poor Allen. Now he lost Mana too.
Poor Maria and Lavi :(
Looks like Cross will have to help Allen back to his feet
Mizuki Abyss chapter 4 . 5/30/2018
I realy realy love it! Update please, please, ppplllleeeeaaassseee!
Caity chapter 4 . 4/4/2018
Please update soon.
Sakihinata chapter 4 . 12/8/2017
What a crual cliffhanger ;)
Sakihinata chapter 2 . 12/8/2017
Awe, that's cute ;)
afallenheart chapter 4 . 10/14/2017
I can't wait to read what comes next!
caity chapter 4 . 7/24/2017
Please update soon!
WildNoa13474 chapter 4 . 6/21/2017
NOOOOOOOOO WHY'D YOU STOP THERE
xXxPhantomxXx chapter 1 . 5/14/2017
What?! Why did you leave Allen's hair red? He's been through trauma two times now. Plus his white hair shows proof of his hard times. Or maybe you're turning white later? Also, it's been about a year. Please, please, please update! This fanfic is so good, and I think it deserves a whole, long completed story. It's really, really great! I really hope you continue this story.
PipeDReam chapter 4 . 4/30/2017
wait wait WAIT YOU'RE OUT OF IDEAS IS THIS BEING DISCONTINUED NO PLEASE SAY IT ISN'T DEAR GOD NO
Free Scarlet chapter 4 . 3/7/2017
Please update an other chapter... befasse it is mean if you leave it like this now that they found allen again. On an other note this story is really really good so big thumps up
Guest chapter 4 . 2/23/2017
This is awesome, please update.
IDontLoveHimAnyM chapter 4 . 1/24/2017
Update! Please please~
caity chapter 4 . 1/9/2017
please update soon
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