Whether not weather.
Why doesn't he turn her then they can go visit daddy and the Cullens.

Get caught by the sheriff.
Motives.
Fast forward then do flashbacks to tell what had happened.

Box's fathers name is Ansel not Thomason.
I gather that since Eddie's family are human that they don't have a clue what they are walking into by coming after Bella.
Are they that a few fer up that they will support him abusing her or has he been lying to them
about their dead relationship?
It is crowd not crowed barely not barley
Trailed off.
Did you write a story about what happened to her before this one?
About the Five and staking Enzo?
Her waste.
As he grumbled.
You two found out.
All here.
So we get to read what the guys did to that arrogant entitled prick Eddie

Bonnie

Ok so a lot has happened in...what?...2 days? I think you need to consider time and relationship growth. Especially between the people that only JUST met Bella.

I feel like this was very rushed, even though it had a good premise. It jumped around a lot. I know it was started 4 years ago, so I'm not sure of the age gaps and with it, the learning curve. Charlie wouldn't have spoken to Bella like that to leave her, not after being the fatherly figure you introduced in the beginning. It should be fleshed out more. More detail, less name switching (I know there are different ways to shorten them, but there only needs to be one as an identifier)..
It was, however, cute and a good idea.

Is she running from Eddie and his family of squirrel munchers? Will she have trouble from Elena?

Could have been lived, rushed.

If the Cullen children knew Eddie was an asshole and was abusing Bella why in Hell didn't they stomp his ass into a bloody pile? Since they did nothing to stop him they are as responsible as he is so they can all go to hell.

Why would the Cullen's track her down because of their idiot son? Will Bella be turned by the end of the story?

Did you not say in an earlier chapter that her bounds bound her wolf side,when Kol turns her won't she also be a hybrid like her daddy Nik or did I miss something? Edi really is full of himself if he believes he can just walk in and demand that she come with him.

Should take closer to twelve /fourteen hours at the speed limit.i live in Illinois and it takes at least five hours to get to Chicago from where I live at the speed not that they have found each Cullen's are human ,right? So what is the problem with taking them all out?

If she knows most of the supernatural world why is she afraid considering Eddie is human? If he had been abusing her why didn't she tell Char!ie,he is the Chief of police right? He could just arrest the prick.

Will you be dragging out the ending of Eddie through the story of will Damon be heading to Forks in the next couple chapters to end him?

Great story! Loved the ending!