Fantastic.

This was so good! It's well written with little to no spelling or grammar issues, has great characterization, gorgeous metaphors, and the captain swan au is perfect and very unique. I love how Killian is so emotional and head over heels for Emma, willing to put his heart out there even when it's risky. That's so Killian. And Emma with her flight response and prickliness/boldness is very accurate. So well done! One of my favorites on this site.

I bloody loved this fic. Brilliantly written as always. Thanks for another great read!

And grinning like a fool. Seriously, what's with you and your talent?

I will finish my review after returning from a cold shower;-) Woah...and sigh...

You and your words and them all going together and making me feel stuff. What's with that?

Aaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhnn! That's all I've got!

Remember that chapter of NTUA where you sent me random letters? We'll have 'em back.

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I do love a good Killian's POV chapter. Love that last bit too...about giving Emma the opportunity to rip his heart out...he is in already.

Guess who! I thought it was time to further my "wander through jen's back catalogue" reading program. (And also my "this chapter is too hard to write so do something else" program. And no,jgkjahgkjhvkghavkhgvkhgv. Emma's plan sounds like the Toyota of plans...eminently sensible but a bit dull. Go for the drink, I say!

I will admit, I had to google Rygel to find out what he looked like. Sorry!

I really like how you've structured this, with the bit of overlap of their perspectives.

that was great! I am a lawyer and I love lawyer Emma and Killian stories.

that was awesome! So glad i am reading this.

I LOVE this story! It was great.

That was amazing and awesome and perfect!