Just wanted to tell you Garret's fence is Basso, not Bosso

This is a good start. it has nice detail, and I like how you're writing Garret

i really wish you would have continued the story

rhanks for writing this

I love the relationship between these two so much!

I've read this soo many times I can't get enough of this story. I hope you make a sequel to this I just loovvee it soo much
~Master Ninja Girl Out~

love love love this

Hey this is the second time I have read your story and I am really liking it when I first read it I didn't read the warnings lol so I guess next time I will have to look for the warnings the one thing I thought for advice was well first of all was what would happen if garret's friend died and he ...well what would he do and did garret kill the general or did he knock him out also would it be even better if you had garret's lover save him and can bosso help to

Hey I just got done reading your fanfiction and for one it was really really good and I also liked how u made garret have a lover and also how u made him the same personality as in the game I should know cuz i play the game the one thing that I had a hard time understanding was wat would happen if garret's lover had died in the prison would garret and bosso find a way to heal her and also well I think that garret was a little harsh to the girl in the beginning but I guess that's just me lol but other than that this fanfiction was really really good so I hope u will keep working on it cuz i am sooooo excited for the next one good luck with the writing 3 thanks

Dear writer,

First off, I would like to start with saying I like this story so far.
On a small side note, I have to say I was slightly confused with Garrett saying words like "F uck" and "S hit". Somehow, I don't believe he would say things like that, but then again, that's how I see it :)
So, now I'm going to read the rest of it, I'm curious where it's going.

I love this whole story, perhaps you would do more?

I really loved the chapter, and the lemon was hot with a capital HOT.
But I kept giggling, since all I could think of was Garrett being like:
"This, Esther, is a penis."

"This, Garrett, is a dog."
This, TheInitiated94, is absolutely amazing

SO GOOOOOOOOOD!

Hello again. You haven't updated for awhile and I'm just 'reminding' you that I love ur story and there are sad lonely peeps out here waiting for your next wonderful chapie. Lol try. Update soon plz!
;3