great story. i would suggest you get a read aloud software (word 360 has it and a few other programs). it will help with dropping small words like to, the, and a's. i know it has helped me alot.

Just found this story for the 1st time.
Excellent read, could use a little grammatical editing (I guessing English is not your first language). Still, I am enjoying your story and look forward to more chapters. I have enjoyed the pacing overall and your combat is very well done. I am not as in the know on details for the Battle tech universe, how soon in the timeline do the clans retrenchment to the inner sphere? I also wonder what roll the Zentradi will play?

I've just binge this entire story looking for any MechWarrior related fics and found yours. And I gotta say I am loving all of this man! Despite the possible gaps in chapter lengths this is well worth the Fav and Follow!

Hope more come!

I like where you are going with this and inserting full size zentradi was a brilliant move...kinda hard to deny it when its standing over you at tall as a light mech.

Finally a new chapter. And it is an intersting one. With a really evil cliffhanger...
I can't wait to read about Morgan and Kym's reaction to this revelation.

It would be interesting how effective a Meltran power armor is against a mech.

And shouldn't they find it interesting that most destroids and (older) valkyries look similiar to certain mech designs?

Very nice to see you back.

Given that MW5 came out, I hope this fic gets more attention.

Glad to see an update. I really like this story

This is marvelous! I thought you abandoned this story totally. Welcome back. The new chapter is interesting. What took you so long?

I love this story but the cliffhangers are murder, hope to read more soon.

A very nice story update! Talk about the UNers providing the proof of thier alternate history.

I've just picked up your story and it's a great idea spelling gets a little spotty but that's ignorable I am aware it's been a long time since you posted a new chapter but I would be interested to see where this story goes

Been looking for this for years. Thank you, more please.

That's a great story! One of the few good BattleTech crossovers. And one, which does not include Clan Wolverine. And it is a crossover with Macross (and not with RoboTech). Too bad, that it seems that you have abandoned it. Couldn't you solve your problems with chapter twelve?

I like this story I hope you update more. Thanks for now.

This is the start of your real interesting story, but where is your end?

Are there any characters' profiles?

Macross is so awsome.

Interesting POV

Nice first blood.