YOU HAVE TO FINISH THIS!
-Georgehorse64

Can't wait for another chapter! Loving this story, John is too precious! :)

Awe, come on now, you've hooked me.

And it seems its been months. I would like to see what comes next.

I really liked the part John said about Julia and the stars. That was really lovely.
"I've picked up cats heavier than you" was a great line as well, john loved cats and it also shows that Auddies was pretty light since she's ill. Great chapter!
'Strawberry fields, nothing is real and nothing to get hung about, strawberry fields forever'

It's a me! Sara! Here to check out this story whilst waiting for you to update PeggySue (no pressure haha)
I really like 'kid' John and 'kid' Audrey. It's so lovely reading about Johns youth since he was a cute kid. (Before he went all rude and sassy Teddy boy).
Can't wait to see where this goes!

This is an amazing story so far! I love the idea! Please update soon!

Lovely chapter. I love the playful relationship both have and the naturalness of their friendship. John's fear if loneliness was well portrayed especially in a time of radical changes in his life. I hope you work with it as time goes on as well as Audrey's personality

ah, lovely banter between john and audrey 3 makes me giggle... really like your story. can't wait to read your next chapter!

That was really great! I love the plot because it's really nice and unique. You should update soon!

I thought it was very good! Please keep it up! Update soon! :)

I really really like this so far! It is such a great idea and you should continue. I promise to be a loyal reviewer!