Reviews for Melee
InkMelody chapter 1 . 3/29/2019
I really like this and would like more please
:D
Flaux chapter 1 . 10/14/2016
Oh, what a wonderful story you got here! I smiled during the entire thing! Donnie is an evil, little genius Mastermind! Haha! But he so deserved the lab. Like seriously? The freaking serenity garden, I laughed out loud - Leo, please stop and go meditate under the dojo's tree. Raph has the dojo to train and Mikey has basically turned the living room into his personal arcade. I supported Donnie during the entire thing!
I really, really loved this, it was very original, beautifully written and everyone was in character!

Thanks for sharing! :D
Donatellosgirl0110 chapter 1 . 8/26/2016
Its so awesomely planned out! i love it!
DaLadyofSouls chapter 1 . 7/22/2016
Fantastic story. watch the teen\pre-teen refs thought, they weren't consistent.
leggo lover 99 chapter 1 . 1/2/2016
Hahaha! That's brilliant!
I always wondered how he got a lab and your version was perfect. :)
ToraOkami101 chapter 1 . 12/30/2015
Oh my god my baby 3 They are all so perfect in this, Donnie absolutely would use the night before a fight to lay a trap for all his brothers.
Fireballin117 chapter 1 . 3/9/2015
Oh my god! Great job, Donnie!
Pimino chapter 1 . 11/29/2014
Wow, this was excellently done! Very original and detailed. I was cheesily smiling throughout the entire thing. Donnie can be such a evil mastermind, can't he? The funny thing is that I can actually see him planning all this and playing it out. Although he might be young, he has the intelligence many people have not yet achieved. (Trust me, I know some people who desperately need the wits he has obtained... or maybe just a dose of common sense!)

Thank you for starting my day with a laugh(: Until next time!
Zelgadis55 chapter 1 . 10/21/2014
Wow, Donnie is such a precocious, evil brat :-P no wonder later in life Raph keeps breaking his bo. All payback for this XD
Anon chapter 1 . 10/4/2014
I loved the plan and how the story was laid out.
Yokai Hebitori chapter 1 . 8/24/2014
Wow! Good one Don! (_) He planned it everything.
This reminds me of that episode on the 2012 series of when Don made a flow chart of asking April about hanging out and it was actually on it. :)

KUDOS On A JOB WELL DONE! This had to get confusing but Excellent Job at Keep Track.
Kain Sinner chapter 1 . 7/30/2014
Very very very nice! I can so see Donnie doing that actually...after all, he loves his lab! :D Well done! Thoroughly enjoyed that.
CelticViking chapter 1 . 4/22/2014
That has got to be one of the best portrayals of Donnie I have ever read! You got him spot on, and it was EPIC! Not to mention funny as hell ;-)
Aeryn Lavanthia chapter 1 . 4/10/2014
Haha! Nice to see a story where Donnie wins the fight for once!
Dramatic person chapter 1 . 3/16/2014
Pfft-HA! I was smiling through the whole thing!
Donnie, the evil little mastermind has triumphed once again! MWAHA!
*cough* Great little story here, had me smiling at Donnie's master plan the whole time ;D
Good job and Happy Writing :D
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