Please continue this story i love it, I want to know what happens.

Loving your story! Hope you're planning tk return soon! I was saddened to see this chapter. Definitely touched my heart. I love Tashio but here he was wrong, but at the same time you managed to touch on how many couples end due to infidelity...lack of love. It explains a lot in terms of why Sesshomaru is the way he is. I imagine Sookie doesn't carry this new baby to term, causing even more pain. Excited to see what happens next and to see more Rin and Sesshomaru action

You really need to work on the overlapping of information. There are so many repeated statements it’s pissing me off. I really want to finish this story because I think it has a decent plot to it, but there are a lot of things I hate about it as well. Your description of Rin’s wounds, both during the attack and when her parents were murdered, are terribly described and horribly overdramatized for how wimpy you described them to be. Do you know how long an “inch and a half” is? RIDICULOUSLY SHORT! She would not have been in “CRITICAL CONDITION” from a FREAKING SCRATCH! Also, you really need a beta or you just need to go back to kindergarten to figure out how to spell correctly and to form a grammatically correct sentence! But seriously, all of those are ridiculous but the repeat of previous info and character thoughts is the worst part. It’s taking forever to read it and it bores the reader to tears.
And one more thing: your demon council is horribly invasive and I would have shown a lot more hatred from the characters for them from the way you describe them and their practices. No sane person would willingly allow someone to examine every last inch of their lives and memories, including letting them watch them have sex. This story needs a lot of revision.

Good plot, but the rest of the story annoys me. There are a ton of spelling mistakes and grammar errors throughout, not to mention the terrible description of scenes and details to the characters. Everything you had the “nurse” do would only have been done by a doctor. School nurses would not be able to diagnose that to any extent nor would they be allowed to administer medicine that was not brought in and had had paper work filled out by the students guardian. You use “horrifying” and “excruciating” to describe a bruise. That’s ridiculous.

I loved it. I hated it but loved. Hate him for doing it, hate him for her pain but you wrote this so well. I was in tears reading it. Poor sookie...poor sesshomaru...this really struck a cord. I honestly cant wait to read the next chapters.

Great chapter continue soon!

I really hope at one point he regrets his choice since then he’d be in his own personal hell.
I wonder if the child survived and Sess has a sister his father doesn’t know about?
If Sess doesn’t want to go down the same path as his father, he can just stay faithful to his mate.

I hate cheaters -_-

Ok Hitoshi needs to die lol
Sess gained some points in this chapter though

Yep still kinda hate sesshomaru and think he doesn’t deserve Rin. All the other pairs treat their mates well.

Maybe if Rin left he’d finally treat her better because this horrible treatment can’t continue

Ok i don’t remember her being willing at being marked... it’s so sad how abusive this story is... someone needs to get Rin away from sesshomaru

Im so confused... Rin was mad at him in the hallway but completely changed her mood so quickly... why is she not trying to run away or fight him more since he’s being so abusive...

Izayoai and Taisho gets no love from me. Like dude you could have told her before you continued your affair. What’s worst is that he truly believes he tried to make them work after the death of their daughter when he did no such thing.

I hope Sookie sits down and talk to Sesshomaru about his hatred for her and tells him the difference between brute strength and emotional strength. So maybe he can come to appreciate his mate- Rin more and not follow in his father footsteps by thinking his mate weak.

I’m curious if the babe survived. With that being said, I’m going to need Sookie to have a demon/human man friend like Idris Elba. He can be an English demon that’s looking to expand his business into Japan. I believe if Sookie was dating someone like Idris she’ll be more than okay. I also believe Sesshomaru would not only respect him but grow to like him and seek council. Because the guy isn’t his father, but old enough to be, but younger than Taisho by a a few years, and achieved a lot by himself. So Sesshomaru could respect someone like and Idris Elba figure until he sort out his issues with his father.

If you’re curious as to how Idris Elba look, speak and act like. Here is a people magazine video of him being voted Sexiest Man Alive. httpsyoutu. be/deyc8HzR-xk

Taisho keeps talking about how Sookie is all material (I don’t see it), well give her someone that doesn’t mind and wants to spoil her. Someone that loves the way she loves herself because they find her confidence sexy. Hell, after what Taisho did to her, she’ll do well to have a demon or human man that shares Idris personality, physique, humor and respectable attitude towards woman. Plus, Idris looks like he would take none of Taisho or any man or demon bullshit. Plus, this might give Sookie a chance to have a second babe if she didn’t lose the third one. Looking forward to the next chapter. Great job. Love the Demoness that rallied around Sookie, because I was wondering where her friends were.

What a pleasant surprise. A new long chapter. I will need to read the story again to remember what happened.

I am glad to see that Sesshoumaru's mother was indeed expecting another child when that arse of Inu no Taisho took the easy way out and left to greener pasture. He not only abandoned her, his son but also his unborn child. The way he spat on Sookie and what she gave him is so sad are hurtful. He is truly an unworthy mate. He should not sit in the council at all. I hate the fact that the members of the council,know about this but still let him not only preside the council but decide who should mate who. And Isayoi is there as well. What a fraud .

I very much dislike Izayoi because she went for a married man and she did not care about the pain she was causing. Her and her mate happiness is built on another's sorrow but that's life. It happen a lot in real life. I just hope Sookie will find love again and also have a happy life. A mate worthy of her. I only wish Isayoi and her mate would get their just Karma,but I am sure it will never happen. It is not this kind of story.

My poor Sookie. I admire her strength. She suffered in silence. Carried the shame she had no right to feel. I hate that she was the only one who was hurting when her mark was removed. How cruel of Inu ni Taisho. But a man in love never cares who he hurt in order to enjoy say love. She was all alone when she lost her child. Her mate could not even find the strength to bring her comfort. No. He only cared about himself. What a mate indeed. As soon as he was alright, he kicked her and his son to the curve. He had no shame cheating . He even dare flaunt his love to her. How sacred mating is does not mean a thing to him. I am glad that for once Inu no Taisho is not painted as the righteous father and Sesshoumaru's mother as the wreaked cheat. Thank you for that.

This hit very close to home because my father had a mistress for years when is was a teen and my mother suffered a lot in silence. I am an adult now but still I hate when people cheat.

I look forward to see how Rin and Kagome are doing. Looking forward to more from you. Take Care .