Oooooh Oxford someone fancy.

(it you)

(I will confess to being in a bar at the current time)shut up I'm not drunk you're drunk

Hm. I did not realize this was an unfinished story and that this chapter in particular was the last one.

I sad.

Okay. I'm not gonna say this is perfect. It's got flaws. But it's damn good.

I should plagiarize this. I should look up how to spell that word and then steal this.

:O

'center'! Sorry, I'm sensitive to that word in rotg/jelsa. Also: this depth *muah*.

I said I liked this before. I was a fool. I was not yet aware of how great this story is. I was not yet worthy to like this story. I'll do better in the future.

I like this and I like you. We're going to be great friends.

lol I say cool beans all the time. I'm a certified dork and proud!

poor old kristoff

Hans being able to see them is really weird. LOL

Anyway. I'm glad the whole search party is working together now. Hopefully they'll find them soon and get rid of Pitch.

Elsa dragging herself along was heartbreaking. :( Poor sweet girl. That and a part at the beginning about Elsa's skating awards were so subtle (compared to Anna hurting her feelings and Elsa's nightmare - super sad, btw. Having her be so happy at first and then reliving that pain all over again. Ugh.), but they still hurt. :( Nice job with the feels.

More? ;D

I need to see Anna and Elsa make up. And Anna dump Hans and get with Kristoff. And Jack and Elsa do more Jack and Elsa stuff. And more of Elsa being Elsa with all of her broken-and-powerful-and-smartypants-architecture-ness.

Well that was fluffy and cute while it lasted. Stupid Pitch. :-

Heh. I had a feeling when Hans made that call that he was somehow linked to Pitch.

I'm with Kristoff, Hans' plan to stick together is just stupid. They're only going to one place at a time and if Elsa goes to a place they've already left, then what? ...If only Anna knew he was manipulating the situation. *sigh*

Glad to see that Jack found Elsa, though and that she's not alone anymore because I have a feeling things aren't going to go too well here in the near future...

Ooookaaay. That was... *cringe* Yeah. :-/

So, I just found this and I'm really enjoying it so far. I'm not a huge fan of Jelsa, though I don't mind it, but of the few fics I've tried, I like this one the best. :) Anyway, I was going to review when I caught up, but this one just got me all worked up and I need to vent. :P

I mean, Anna, right? Yikes. First, I know that she was sorry for forgetting Elsa, but I'm having issues with totally believing that she 'forgot' her. Not that she'd have done it on purpose and then lie about it, but... eh. The whole thing really bothers me. She LIVES with Elsa, they're the only two there, so I can't believe that her sister not being there didn't cross her mind once. "Oh, Els isn't here because she's in class." Or whatever. Because even that would lead to, "Crap! I didn't pick her up." They were both finishing up their last classes of the day, so it's not like she didn't know she didn't leave class and head over to Elsa's. *sigh* I don't know... Obviously we know she got distracted by Hans, but still, for all she does for Elsa and being familiar with the routine, I'm having issues believing she'd be that careless.

Anyway. HANS. Ugh! I did not see that coming. (The marriage thing.) I guess I should have with what happened in the movie and then him showing up, but I didn't. (Good job. ;) ) I thought at this point, maybe Anna had just met him recently - er, more recently than a few months - and was just hanging out with him. I was surprised that Anna actually asked though and takes Elsa's opinion for what she can and can't do. She's 18 and Elsa can't legally stop her, but it's nice for her to ask anyway. And good thing she did because someone's got to talk some sense into her. :-/ But wow... They really thought Elsa would want to live with 12 men? Especially after only living with Anna.

And then of course, there's that last hurtful comment. :( That one, I do understand. Not that I approve, but I can see how she could feel that way on occasion. I don't think she meant it, but that doesn't mean there's not a little bit of truth to it, too. She cares for Elsa because she loves her (and I've really liked how you've shown that so far), but it's easy to use that as something to throw in her face when they're discussing caring for each other. Poor Elsa, I feel so bad for her that she had to hear that. And poor Anna... You know she felt awful. :( Still, even though I feel bad for her, too and I get how it slipped, I'm still slightly mad at her for it. Elsa is in the position she's in because she protected Anna in the accident. If anyone has a reason to be resentful, Elsa does. Not that Anna can't, too, but I feel like I want to make her to understand that she's not the only one affected by the accident. I mean, yeah, she's perfectly aware that Elsa's in a wheelchair and they both lost their parents, but I... I don't know, I can't figure out how to explain what I mean. :-/

Okay, I guess I'm done rambling now. On to the last few!

Oh and YAY for her powers being revealed! :D

I'm looking forwards to the next chapter Tohdoh. You're a really good writer :)

And now, the castle is going to crush them.

After that awful comment, I must say that you have combined Guardians, and Frozen beautifully.

O-o this is crazy. BEST AU EVER!