So why exactly is Snape refereeing the match? The only reason he bothered in canon was to keep a closer eye on Quirrell. The suspected in-story reason seems to be that he wants to secure Slytherin's victory in the cup, but this just seems like a thinly veiled excuse to have the plot deviate as little from canon as possible. Snape would be able to find far subtler ways of achieving this, an there's a reason why he never wanted to referee any further matches in the series. Within this setting, it makes no sense that Ron and Hermione would learn the leg locker to use against Snape. Also, the amount of Ron bashing in this story is excessive. I'll continue reading for now, being bored and all, but this really isn't very good.

Far too much canon rehash in this story. I'll continue reading for now, but as The Stranglers so famously said: "Something better change!"

An amazing fanfiction thanks ! i hope you will continue the story one day but for now i don t care as i still have plenty of sequels to read

enjoyable and amazing! your version of harry in slytherin is one of the best fanfics I've read so far.

Intriguing first chapter.

Wow very good

thank you for your hard work

Perfect fanfiction... so well done

This story is truly amazing. Every other one I've read has either been Super Harry or Dark Lord Harry, but Harry in this story is just normal, old Harry, except that he's a Slytherin. I also love what you're doing with Draco. Poor Draco gets bashed too much, but I think if Ron hadn't told Harry all those nasty things about Slytherin in J.K. Rowling's books, Harry and Draco might've actually gotten along. I, myself, was Sorted into Slytherin House, so I really love this series. Alhough, my name, which means Warrior Blood in German and Spanish, would suggest I would be placed in Gryffindor. I prefer Slytherin though. Anyway, I really love this series, and I think you are a fantastic writer. You're definitely one of my top favorite writers on here! :3

this is quite interesting

Just finished this story and it is AMAZING. You have complete understanding of character interaction and have even made some immensely competent and interesting changes. This is what I yearn for when I fancy a bit of Harry Potter AU

How is Neville related to Professor Snape.

It was ok i want see him in ravenclaw though

It's a great pity that such a well-written story uses the endlessly-copied original template. I've struggled on through Bezoars, Remembralls, and rock cakes for the umpteenth time so far but I can't face another Troll in the bathroom repeat without screaming and banging my head on the wall - I've read hundreds. This story could have been outstanding with new material.

- Hip

This chapter felt extremely rushed event wise, which was kind of a letdown considering how well the rest of the story was in that matter.