Sorry, I was wrong I read Kuwahara as Kawamura and forgot that Kawamura was a sushi shop and this is a ramen. Sorry, my bad -_-

Ramen Kuwahara's in Tokyo you're character is in Kanagawa

All the Yukimuras are confusing me. But good story

OUCH. By the way, I've been meaning to comment about this but.
Marui is in class E. How ironic.

So awesome! *.*

Hello! That was a really good chapter :-) i cant believe this isnt your first language! It was really good, im hoping to see more of lil sis' in the next chapter hopefully! Hope you update soon :-)))

I feel that your story is going to be really interesting! Aha but your chapters are pretty short.. Like, your first 3 chapters could just make one chapter... Because your chapters are short, the story is going pretty slowly. I mean slow progression is okay, don't rush anything, but if it's too slow (and cause, again, short chapters) there isn't much to comment on :( maybe later on when we're slightly deeper into the story though. But anyways, I shouldn't really be talking since I don't even write stories (just read. A lot) yeah. I'll keep track of your story though! :) bookmark it on my phone and check up again later haha

The plot is far from the usual plots but the storyline is a bit slow paced and the chapters are short. Other than that, keep it up

Please update!

This story is good, though progress is a bit slow but all in all it has a good plot. your englísh is good too, though your romaji has some minor errors in spelling ('moxi moxi' moshi moshi) they dont have 'x' , 'L', 'v' and 'q' in their alphabet. Anyway thats all will wait for your update x3

Hi! This story is really good! Keep updating!
Sometimes you write 'she said to HIS brother' or 'he said to HER sister' but it should be the other way around, so, 'she said to HER brother' or 'he said to HIS sister'
Other than that, most of your English grammar is pretty good!