I liked it continue , it was pretty good

Oh my goodness, there are no words to describe how much I loved this. It brought tears to my eyes, just like the end of the movie did. I truly believe that the end of a fic can really make or break it, and you definitely made it at the end. I adored the end of your fic, especially the last few lines. Beautiful.

Aaannndd.. I cried.. Hard

oh my god. im writing a Pompeii fic myself and fuck i gotta step up my game! your witing is fucking poetry by the way!

It is beautiful. I think I like it more this way, than with the overdramatic acting on screen :-)