That was beautiful!

Aww sweet husband and wife moment

I enjoyed it so much! I liked how you described everything. It is very detailed.

So, so, so pretty. I love how you got inside Mary. I felt like I was there in the room with her, experiencing the majesty of this night.

Even though there were the witnesses and Mary's ladies were there, it still felt like the night belonged to just Mary and Francis.

This was so beautiful.

Ugh. They are so happy. I'm so happy. Great job on capturing this beautiful, hopeful moment in their lives. It's so obvious how much they have missed this intimacy with each other. Plus...it was pretty hot, too.

Very nice oneshot :)

-Nicole

Love it!
I love, love, love Francis and Mary together and i like hearing their thoughts through the consumation. I would like to see more stories from you!

smutty and sweet Frary! just the way I like : ) Wife! ahhhhh that makes me so happy!
this was great writing , as usual! i love reading your work!

loved this! I love your frary fics :)

Yay you posted it! Seems like the work of rewatching that scene over and over did some good! Loved it...only a T rating though? Lol I loved their momentnat the end most...Francis calling her "wife"

Hot and brilliant! I enjoyed it a lot.