| Reviews for Til I Die |
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arimamatsui chapter 4 . 7/12 Nice |
anxietyowo chapter 4 . 3/11 pls do more |
Guest chapter 4 . 3/31/2019 This is so good! Why there no more? |
FreckledBrunette chapter 4 . 5/23/2015 update soon! |
DewdropSunlight chapter 4 . 9/1/2014 Loved it! Please write more :) |
OnceaSuperWhoLockian chapter 3 . 7/20/2014 Good chapter! Loving this story so far! Please update soon! Jess |
OnceaSuperWhoLockian chapter 2 . 4/28/2014 I really enjoy this story so far! I definitely think you've captured a better sense of flow and characterization in the second chapter than the first. I still would like to see more of Arthur's feelings and reactions about Merlin and his magic and what he has done for Arthur. Overall good start. Please update soon! Jess |
Elise.v chapter 2 . 4/18/2014 Nice :D |
ProcrastinationIsMyCrime chapter 2 . 4/17/2014 Merlin's going to be in for a shock, hehe. Great chapter. A bit of advise; keep modern slang e.g anyways, out of your dialogue to give it a more medieval 'feel' to the reader. |
NykyrianKiara chapter 1 . 3/11/2014 Want to see Arthur's reaction. Very nice start. I liked the beginning with dialogue from the show. |
Nihal de la terre du vent chapter 1 . 3/11/2014 I really like this story ! I hope arthur will not be too angry with merlin' s magic. |
GoldenFireFish chapter 1 . 3/11/2014 love it! very well written. I believe you have done very good with this and look forward to more. dialog is good. |
ProcrastinationIsMyCrime chapter 1 . 3/11/2014 Well isn't that an innocent cliffie? That's a mean cliffie! I hope you update soon, great work |
mersan123 chapter 1 . 3/10/2014 Hey, great start. I like how Arthur has managed to get Merlins secret out of Gaius, this will obviously bring a whole new twist to the original story. Look forward to it. |
kweandee chapter 1 . 3/10/2014 Sounds interesting sooo far... :) |