Love it so far. Please update soon.

Despite being almost 5 years late I do support Channa :)

Wow, why is guest being such an asshole? I get that everyone is entitled to their opinion, but guest is just being a little bitch. I realise that readers can read reviews, so guest, this little bit is for you.
I'd like to see you try and write a story that is as half as good as this author's. Oh. That's right. You can't. That's why you spend your sad time hating on everyone else's stories. I'm surprised the author is even updating after getting all of the complaining from you. But hey, I guess that this just shows everyone that the author is so much better than you will ever be, because she keeps writing, even when she gets sad little assholes like yourself bitching about what she writes. So yeah, you can offer suggestions and constructive criticism, no one minds that, but no one is gonna listen to you if you drift through life bitching about everything, because one day, someone is just gonna beat the absolute crap out of you.

And back to the author, I'm sorry about posting that in your review page , but it had to be said. I am loving this story, and I'm so glad that you took my idea into account, you know, the one where Chandler gets jealous? It means a lot that you think my idea is good enough. Ignore reviews like guest's, unless they have constructive criticism. But if it is just complaints, then just read the reviews that make you smile :) keep going!

So she suggested Monopoly and then spent her whole time playing Monopoly judging the girls for saying yes? If she liked and respected the girls I could maybe overlook the fact that she is insisting on living there when her "crap ton" of money could afford a hotel room or even a luxury vacation. But the fact that she seems to barely tolerate and looks down on the people that are letting her stay rent free and has no qualms about living off their generosity doesn't give me warm feelings about her. In fact I feel like I'm reading about the person who will murder them in their sleep.

But since you seem to think it's "absurd" for people to quit reading stories that they don't like I'll stick around and see where this train wreck heads. Like all my critical reviews I expect this to just disappear into the ether.

What do you call someone who uses author notes to call readers "absurd" but deletes critical reviews?

Hypocritical.

Technically true but not the answer we were looking for.

Absurd.

Technically true but not the answer we were looking for.

Blunz

ding ding ding. Congratulations you won the right to use reviews as as pm b/c the author will delete them.

Mary Sue to the rescue. She's so much smarter than the other characters even she's groggy and has just woken up.

So she makes a fool out of herself with her phone call and twirling the cord but is judgmental of the other three girls for giggling over Paolo? We get it, good ol' Mary Sue is so much smarter about Paolo than the girls were on the show. What about Paolo made her think he had an ax or was an arsonist? That part made no sense.

Once again, if she is rich why does she need charity? Seems like there could have been a less contrived way to get her in the center of the action. Everything she says is just so perfect, I'm definitely getting a Mary Sue vibe.

Instead of complaining about Mondler fans not liking other pairings, consider this: Some Mondler don't have a problem with the fact that both had many love interests before they got together...BUT reading fanfiction is a form of entertainment that is done solely for the purpose of enjoyment and some people have to pick and choose which stories to read b/c they have busy lives and would rather spend their limited free time reading about their favorite pairing than waste their time reading about pairings they don't like. This is not literature or english class where everyone has to read every story on the site and putting people down and judging them b/c they are using subjective reasons to decide what to read or not to read is a very condescendingly rude thing to put in an author's note. I find it absurd that you think that was an appropriate use of an author's note.

My complaint about Channa has nothing to do with Mondler and everything to do with Mary Sue.

Once again a rich freeloader.

Seems like someone with a "crap ton" of money would book themselves in a hotel rather than invite themselves over to some stranger's apartment complaining that they have no other place to stay. The knowing exactly what floor and apartment number to show up at seems mighty Mary Sue-y to me.

Loved it.

Nice development. Way to go, Chandler!

Nice use of Joey. All three girls homing in on Paolo is an interesting departure. I like Anna's take on Paolo, and Ross's characteristic blaming her for everything. More soon, I hope.

Glad you made the effort to continue. and I see another chapter up for reading too. Good work.

Loving it.

Interesting update.
Keep it up.