1000 words in 5 years. Either you really need to buckle down and commit, or realize writing may not be your calling. Interesting notion, but it hasn’t even done anything yet.

An Alchemist femHarry ? With femslash ?
Yeah count me in !

So I read your bio and holy shit you sound amazing, almost exactly like me, do you watch rwby? I'm reading the secrets of the immortal nicholas flamel series and...wow okay sorry I should probably compliment you on this story first, it was a good descriptive and I liked it Lolz s

it was horrible and it needed more taste how you say in england it needed way more flavour

although, from the description, it sounds interesting, having only a short first chapter is a downfall... do you plan on updating?

This just occurred to me and I need to ask somebody, but what is the difference between James' and Lily's sacrifice with regards to protecting their family? Surely if James died to save Lily and Harry, (or Fem!Harry), then they would fall under the same protection? Might actually give Lily the same protection as Harry got, which may explain all of those 'Oh my god! Lily is alive!' fics out there. I can tell that this is going to be good so please update?

Next part

Good start

this is a Fantastic premise for a story, update soon please!

PS: could you add Fleur, Daphne, to the multi ship please.
your stories, your choice's.

4/5

Well you've got a start, never seen some state where their story diverts from JKR's work.