Well, this is so much better than what they did on the show for sure! Thank you for sharing this. Sorry I don't read, write or speak German. ;)

Wow!

Wow you sure know how to write some hot stuff. Love it! This is exactly how I pictured their first time would go as well. I like how you incorporated their playfulness and just made it really believable. :)

Oh if it were on cable we might see that! FANTASTIC! ;)

Still love the story. Love the whole new kinky things that you wrote into the fic *thumbs up*