Is this before or after the Edolas ark? Because if it's after, NOBODY in Fairy Tail should be alive. They all would've died in the lacrima. Remember Gajeel broke it? Well, the only reason Gajeel ever joined Fairy Tail was because Phantom Lord attacked it. The only reason Phantom Lord ever attacked was because Jude (Lucy's Father) paid them to get Lucy back. So Fairy Tail would've died in Edolas. If this is before that, then yeah, it's ok.

can't wait for natsu and lucy to fall in love! update soon!

like it... update sooon!

Hmm. This is a very interesting idea and I would like to see where it goes.

Well, the moment of truth is here. I'm very eager to see what's going to happen.

Interesting developments here. I would suggest separating it into paragraphs so it's easier to read.

Nice story

( _ ) P-please do me a favor and separate the very long run-on paragraph...I can't read it without ending up re-reading what I already read...-sweat drops-

But I did like chapter one...a very good start :) And I'm curious to know how things will go considering Lucy here is joining later than planned :3

I'll be looking forward to reading more! :D

Just for future reference, her dad's name is Jude. Anyways, the summary really drew me in. Please put up the next chapter soon!

There's an interesting plot to it and I'm wonderibg how it's going to play out.
Hope you up date soon.

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