soooo cute!

This was a really cute Alvinatty one shot! It was really sweet. You're a really great writer!

This was a cute story for Alvin and Brittany, plus the fact that Brittany is dating Bart and Alvin is being his usual womanizing self brings more romantic tension to the counterparts friendship, because it makes you wonder how and when these two might get together.

I got a little confused by the ending as I didn't know what Brittany meant by "follow him home". Did she follow him in her car even though it was broken down, or was it simply that she "followed" Alvin into his car? It's most-likely the second option for the obvious reasons, and because Brittany sounded sick and tired, and was in no state to drive.

I have to be a little suspicious of Bart's intentions as he didn't give Brittany any reason for him not being able to pick her up, and considering the seriousness of the situation he'd need a pretty good excuse. Something tells me that he's up to something bad, like i.e. cheating on his girlfriend. It says something for why Alvin was so angry with him (then again it could simply be because he abandoned Brittany) and because this is the one time he says no to Brittany. Still, it could be anything.

The part where Alvin and Brittany discovered their feelings for each other was both bittersweet and heartwarming. I was little disappointed it had to end here though, as would loved to see how Alvin and Brittany cope with this and whether they do confess their feelings eventually.

A great emotional short. I look forward to reading more of your stories.

This was very goodd you are an excellent writer (:

Oh wow, this was good! I like how you added in Bart (from The Legend of Sleeping Brittany, right? ;D), I could even hear his voice since he's kind of an idiot and you wrote that pretty well, lol.

I LOVE the ending obviously, it was soooo cute! I can't wait to read more stories from you!

I really liked this story ;D It was kind of different to your other story's. Different in a good way though ;) You should do one shots more often, your really good at them!

I just love it! It was beautifully written! It's sad that it was a one-shot!