poor valvalicia.
you know i'd always thought that kain and dear valval would be...
it kinda makes abit of sence and when you become protective of some one you know your falling for them.
i bet if she'd allow herself to fall for kain, she'd recover her humanity.

ahh! this is the best! iv always loved this fic, from the first time i read it on some other website i cant remember the name of... but its great! its totally awsome! u rock!

I admit, this is the weakest of your work that I've read, but it's not too bad.

Good chapter. I'm running out of imaginative things to say now. Can you tell?

Another great chapter.

This is definately one of the better written fics out there. You've got some talent.

This is really good.

I've just started playing FF4 again, so I thought, seen as my memory was refreshed about the story, I'd read this. I have to say, it's started very well.

This was a great story. :) I especially liked the parts with Valvalvis.

I loved this, please post the sequel soon, while I'm waiting I'll reread Magus' Quest

I really really really love this story:)

I love this! Kain is one of my favorite FF characters of all time, and it seems like he always gets bastardized in fan fiction. I'm so glad I'm not his only fan _ This is really well written and interesting. Keep it up!

AWEsome to good for words. If you want you have a reserved spot in my fic Quest for meaning. E-mail me at my fellow author

so far this story is great. seeing the story in my favorite characters perspective is intriguing and it's something a writer could take anywhere. i've noticed a few typos here and there but other than that so far you're doing the story great justice.

I had read this before once over at RPGclassics (which I know you co-run the fanfiction side of it) and had loved it. Both our portrayel of the characters and the writing itself. I'm glad you went ahead and added to this website because your writing is very good. By the way you know this is 64 pages long. I printed the thing out one day.