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Hey, it's great to see you again. I'm glad you liked the new miniseries.
It's going to be nice to see this updated again :) Looking forward to the expanded chapters.

Welcome back, fivers11. I remember you as my very first reviewer to my Watership Down stories and it's wonderful to have you back. That's all that matters. Merry Christmas. :)

What happened to max?

Great chapter.

I especially love the stuck scene featuring Fiver in this story.

Nice job. :)

please carry on

Awesome! A lot has happened in this chapter, even though it wasn't action-packed, it still had a lot of development!

The... I guess it was a fight scene...with Bigwig and Blackberry was really interesting! I can totally understand why she would want to keep her meetings with Campion a secret. Even if Campion is helping the Watership rabbits, it still wouldn't be good for everyone to know that she's meeting him. However unlikely the possibility, there might be a spy in Watership Down. I was surprised that Bigwig agreed to keep her secret, but that was very nice of him. (He really is a sweetheart inside.

Aw, Fiver is so cute! And sleepy... I hope he can help Larch out with his nightmares! I've always hated nightmares, and his sound really disturbing! *sends virtual hugs for Larch*

Hazel really ought to tell someone about his dream. What if something were to happen to you, Hazel? Then no one would know what was going to happen!

Haha, something crazy always DOES happen when it rains on Watership Down! I never noticed that before.

Anyways, this was a great chapter! Can't wait to read the next one!

Lol! I love the little sleeping scene of Fiver and Molly. Poor Fiver falling asleep while Bigwig is talking, while Molly is wide away. Anyway great job on the new chapter! Thought for awhile you wouldn't update.

Please update! There hasn't been any updates in awhile now. I'm itchen to read the next chapter from you. Update soon!

Poor Fiver. Just because he's a runt doesn't mean he's unattractive. Wanting a girl is often a hard thing to go though.
Excellent writing. Molly looks like a very sweet character. Looks like Fiver has potentials after all.

I am so ashamed right now... I completely forgot to review this.
Anyways, I REALLY love this chapter! I know I say that every time, but they keep getting more awesome.
Sly and Heather are really cool characters. I could understand their point of view, yet I hated them for trying to eat the rabbits... And THEN the flood hit! You make it really easy to identify with the characters and feel their pain, even if they were just trying to eat my favorite characters. And, I now like Sly and Heather, so, well done. :) I hope they'll find a nice home on Watership Down.
Well, I've got to run, but good luck on the next chapter, and i can't wait to read it! :)

Love it! You did great. Plus that name really suited him. Sly ooooo Sly.

Cool slyyyyy

I have now arrived, slightly late, to review this chapter of awesome! ;)
This chapter is definitely my favorite so far! :) The dream sequence was AMAZING-I felt like I could see and hear it all along with Hazel! I like your take on Hazel and Fiver's mom, it's really original and cool! I never thought about Fiver inheriting his abilities from his mom...so, well done there! The vision of the future was really interesting, although i'm hoping it doesn't come true, for the Watershippers' sakes.
And...the weasel! That weasel is TERRIFYING me! Seriously, I have been afraid of elil in WSD before, but never like this. It's like he's a real, actual villain!
HAWKBIT LIVESSSSSS! For now, anyways...
Anyways, great chapter! Can't wait to see what will happen next time! :)

Great cliffhanger! You do such a good job. Keep it up.