That was absolutely beautiful! I loved how you protrayed Nezumi and his interactions with Shion, I love this couple and I'm super glad to find anyhting to do with them... and you're right, there are many songs that would fit them and this one I hadn't heard, but I'm glad I did, she has a beautiful voice. Cheers!

That was cute

No such thing as too cheesy. :D I thought it was wonderful, and I appreciate the time it took to write something like this. Thanks! Love your depiction of Nezumi.

IM SOBBIN THAT WAS SO CUTE I CANT DEAL

*pulls you out of the corner* No hiding! o.o I don't think it's cheesy and I always love it how Shion und Nezumi interact in your stories. :3 It's so cute and lovely, so I really hope you'll write more some of those one shots you've planned. It's so nice when they are together and happy.

Well, I already told you what I think about this story. Nezumi-centered stuff is really hard to write but pretty cool, I think you get him very well. And yes, thinking about Shion all the time is the best. XD
The song is really fitting for the story! *-*
*gives you raspberry pudding*