Wow! I need to go buy myself a portable fan after reading this.

You are amazing at writing one-shots that are both hot and sweet at once. This was so much more than just a hot smutty one-shot. There was meaning to it. Very well done!

So your stories are sooo good

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This text is smut. Its also very romantic. They need and love each other and that plays out in every line. So sweet!

Truly adored the first half, sweet and comic in equal turns - and then the passion begins ;D

The best smut I've ever read! And believe me, I've read alot of Captain Swan smut, so to be able to be surprised like this isn't very easy. Five stars is my rating, for sure...

Romantic and smutty, just how I like it, LOL! Thanks for an entertaining read!

{grins} A delightfully passionate moment.

*giggle* Excellent as per usual hon!

I am crying because this is beautiful and why cant this happen on the show? I loved it. Thank you. I really needed that. I was kind of down after last nights episode and it helped me a lot, so thanks

I like the excuse for the non buttoning but. As a person who often buttons things one habdedly quite quickly, you get use to it. Though I suppose blouses can be more difficult due to the billownesss of the material and the size of the buttons.

so good!