That was a really beautiful date, but the whole time I kept thinking thins like, "That is so out if character!" and "That is not what Madame Puddifoot's is like!" Then of course I finished the story. Good plot twist, and well-written!

AHAHAH! I love how it's all a story James is telling, the part with the Marauders is hilarious! It's so well-written, and it makes a simply fantastic prequel to Murphy's Law. Well done!