Please update!

Please update!

This was a nice chapter. It had been a while for sure since the last update. The writing seems to have vastly improved. I enjoyed the chapter.

Reading Elsa's out-of-body experience was pretty cool. I enjoyed that part. I feel bad for Anna, though I thought for a moment Elsa had actually died and the out-of-body experience was actually her ghost. Haha.

Thank you for updating and hopefully you update again soon.

Hi I'm a private of the united states army and my name is blake schultz and i was shot in my leg in the line of duty but with a ak-47 and just to tell you that was the most pain fullest feeling i every day and that day my patrol was attacked and 2 trucks in front of us were blown up and i carried my bestfriend private justin flayer 4 miles back to a base in the middleeast (i can not reveal the name as it is under government access) and i just couldn't believe my eyes that i got shot and draged him back

Update please, not a lot of military elsanna fics! Please continue

at fist i though that the friend would be Kristoff xD
this look pretty interesting. lets see how will continue.
hey, petty officer. :P see you in next chapter! :D

Great story... please make an update

I kinda have some problems with how the letter is formatted, and also some of the sentences get really long.
Other than that its a good start!

Song lyrics inserted like that destroy the continuity of the chapter. Also, spirit Elsa is a ridiculous way to try to introduce the flashbacks. Just label it as x days/months/whatever prior to deployment or something, don't try to make it a drugged up Elsa reflecting on her life. Or better yet, introduce the information in interactions between Anna and Elsa post injury and don't do the flashbacks at all.

Good chapter, update soon please. :)

I liked this chapter a lot. We got to see Elsa and Anna being with each other and spending time together. I loved the fluff in the chapter such as Anna getting flour everywhere and Elsa chasing her all over the apartment. That was very cute! :)

I won't lie, Do You Want to Build A Snowman is the saddest song in Frozen. The way you incorporated it here with Elsa latching on to the memories of her parents was heart wrenching. As much as I loved the fluff and seeing Elsa and Anna together in their new apartment, I must admit that the Do You Want to Build A Snowman part was my favorite part of this chapter. My eyes were legitimately wet. Excellent job on that scene of the chapter.

Keep up the phenomenal work and I'll be ready for chapter 8 when it comes.

This is going well, I can't wait to see more!

This chapter was excellent. It had a lot of emotion to it and I enjoyed it greatly. Elsa's struggle to want Anna to move on because she's leaving is powerful because of Anna's determination to stay with Elsa is so passionate. They both love each other yet Elsa understands that war will change you. Anna doesn't care because she knows she loves Elsa and she knows Elsa loves her. She's willing to fight for that love and that is what makes this story so great. As for things that can fixed, the story progression is great, but some of the grammar can be fixed. Other than that, it's a wonderful story. I look forward to more updates in the future!

Anna's letter is very touching. It really lets us (as readers) know just how much she loves Elsa and just how much she misses her. It's really endearing. I look forward to reading more. :-)

Yep, yep, yep. This is a Follow, indeed. I love Elsa's letter at the end. She's letting Anna know that she's all right and that it's not quite as bad in Iraq as the news tends to make everything seem to the public. I hope this story ends with Elsa and Anna being together back home. I hope Elsa isn't going to die overseas. Either way, I'm going to continue this story! :-)