If I wouldn't know about already existing sequel, I would completely disappointed by this ending. Your story listed as Romance, but it's very little romance between Carlos and Elsa. In fact, there are more romance between other people than between these two. It's like it all happens out of sight (our sight). Not really good. Well, I hope sequel will have more moments of those two.

So as the father of 3 (including twin girls) I got REALLY 'Frozened-out'. We saw the movie in the theater and I admit I thought it was great. The girls loved how the sisters saved each other and didn't need the 'handsome prince' to ride in at the last minute.

Then the ad-nauseam blitzkrieg of marketing and toys hit the streets and I wanted to barf.

I've never considered reading a Frozen FF, but yours is truly incredible. Well written, interesting story and 3D characters (I admit I'd like a bit more Carlos).

Overall, excellent story; thank you for your efforts.

md

So your name is Olaf?

Do not test her patience indeed...

How long did it take to write Elsa showing off her vocabulary? And one more thing... WHAT!

"Four Seasons"... ever heard Liszt's Liebestraum (No. 3 in A-flat minor)? That is one perfect piece of music.

This story is... my 2nd best frozen I've ever read. After seeing Elsa in Once Upon A Time and knowing the original Snow Queen story, I was wondering if u could adapt the dark mirror into ur story

I cannot properly tell you how much loved this. I'm reeling in emotions. You have single handedly made me love these two dorks even more. And I didn't think that was possible. They're written so beautifully and true to character it's not even funny.

And as for Good Old Hans...*Standing ovation* That was brilliant. Also it seems there'll (hopefully) is/will be a sequel to this masterpiece?

*Goes a hunting* Thank you for writing!

Goddamn! Sooo badass! I freakin' love it! Has got to be one of the, if not my top Elsa kicking ass depictions ever, hah XD

So we have all this big shot countries already planning how to garner Elsa's favor of their own questionable interests huh. I'd like to see the Queen pound those expectations into minute ice crystals ;) Maybe that 'thought planting' of Morana's will bear fruit in the near future?

This was a very unique story and highly entertaining. I look forward to the completion and posting of future sequels .

How the hell do you write all this?!

These hands of ours are burning red!
Their loud cries tell us to grasp happiness!
ERUPTING
FEY BORN!
FINGEEEERRRR!
Love Love
MELTDOWN FIST!
...

Sorry I couldn't resist.

Okay onto what i actually think. I like the way the story is paced. It is consistent, makes sense and keeps everything neat.

I look forward to the sequel.

Wow...just... WOW. I am in shock and awe right now... just shock and awe. A masterpiece my good sir. A sheer masterpiece...

That... was terrifying. That last bit? Yeah. Um, stuff of nightmares... Really dark, but I like the dark, so... *applauds you* I loved your story! :) Keep up the good work!