I was curious when I have read the summary. It was actually a good story though it kinda pet peeves me with the constant misspellings (drug instead of drag, he/her/the, etc.), appropriateness of when or where to put certain punctuation, missing words in the sentence, grammatical errors.

I like those anecdotes you have inserted about pregnancy and such, also the fact that Sasuke is fascinated with the size of the baby while growing inside the womb. And that you've showed the perspectives of Sasuke, Sakura and Karin. All in all it's a nice story.

I was very intrigued by this fic and really wanted to read it, but I just can't make it through it. There are a a lot of grammatical and spelling and punctuation errors that simply drive me insane. They snag my attention and I can't get lost in the story. I would recommend trying to find a beta reader in the beta section of the site and have them go through and edit said errors. From what I've read, though, this has a lot of potential!

i love this story.

Heh. So Sakura and Sasuke got their dreams for the future fullfulled at the same time. and Naruto too. How about that. Now lets see how they deal with Karin, as i doubt she is out of the picture just yet. And what about the littlest Uchiha? I think he's gonna be a little hellion for his daddy. Maybe they will fight for Sakura's attention? I can't want for Naruto and Hinata to have their kid...maybe they can have a daughter so little Mako has someone to grow up with.

Love your story Sasuke and sakura forever :-) sasuke and sakura actually got married they have a daughter name sarada. Sakura is the mother of sarada ((NOT KARIN)) kishimoto didnt even brother to write her at the end... im so glad sasuke aplozie to her and then married her and had a little baby girl :-) really love ur story

Makoto Uchiha like Mikoto Uchiha. Over whelming cuteness.

Rose is back babies!

Everyone: Who are you?

Rose: *falls down anime style* I thought you guys loved me ;-; Jk writing kept me away from reading fanfiction so... I'm not surprised nobody knows me.

Chapter 1

("I just - I can't!" He pulled the fuzzy fabric closer to his legs. "She's a chick.")

Someone go get him a male doctor. I know that I wouldn't tolerate a male doctor seeing my body even if I had a problem. I just can't xD

("Mr. Kurosawa, if it's any consolation, I've worked with women and men and I've seen almost everything. It's nothing to be embarrassed nor apprehensive about.")

That sure won't assure me if I was him lol

(Sakura couldn't count the horrible times when a kunoichi would be rushed to the hospital with mind-oggling injuries that would result in problems with the uterus or even a hysterectomy. )

Awww :( the sad life of a kunoichi.

("Sakura-!" Tsunade's face looked like a mix between shock and pleasantry. "That's a wonderful conclusion to come to!")

I thought she would be worried and have mixed feelings about it xD

(But just knowing that you're giving life to something for someone that is dying to start a family just makes me happy! It wouldn't matter to me if I had to blood relations because it's not like I was going to take part in that child's life in the first place.")

I believe that is why most don't want to be surrogate mother.

Chapter review: Not much is going on in this chapter so I don't have much to say.

Chapter 2

(So she'd just curl up in her living room with a book to read or a newspaper to get the latest information to quell her boredom.)

I didn't know she reads books! XD When she is around Sasuke I'm just like: "Shoot me." but if he didn't exist, she makes a decent character.

("Making me look so damn nerdy - non of these Konoha girls have glasses and the ones that do look horrid!")

Karin... You look good with and without glasses :3 And lol I'm supposed to feel insulted since I do wear glasses sometimes but nahh she have a point. I look terrible with them.

(She bought these for special occasions, the small case for contacts so she wouldn't be completely blind in her quest to get answers. )

The sad reality of people who wear glasses ._.

(Since she got married she liked to think she was a respectable woman so she didn't show that much skin like she used to in the 'good old days')

I'M SO GLAD SHE CHANGED. I wouldn't call her old clothes, well, clothes.

(She swiveled around and stuck the golden key into the small brass )

XD I read that as breast.

(. "And I don't want to wait for those results - I know somebody that works here and she tells me that you have the results almost instantly! I want them instantly or I swear to God.")

Impatient as ever smh but I understand why she reacts to this because she have been waiting for 3 freaking years.

(If she wasn't able to carry his child then their marriage would be based on nothing, wouldn't it? She sighed heavily. Being married to Sasuke was a huge pain in the ass.)

Sasuke should stop being an asshole. I know how important it is to have children but don't marry someone for that! Jehdfhjdhfjdb Heartless duck ass!

("But that baby wont be mine. It wont even be r-related to me.. It wont even have my red hair.")

Awww ;-;

Chapter review: Oh shap!
Sasuke is here.
Doomsday.
Someone pass me some popcorn... *Eats* Well played Sasuke, well played.

Sasuke: ... *smh*

Chapter 3

(Or, he wondered, was it because he was always out?)

Then come home soon! Geez! I'll be flipping mad if my husband rarely comes home for more than a year. We would get back to phrase one of a relationship which is 'Strangers'... Wait, that is not phrase one! That is phrase one of meeting new people lol

(As he took a seat his mind began to wander - had she been cheating whist he was away?)

Dude, you not in a position to be questioning that xD besides, remember when she was obsessed with you? So nope.

(the same look she gave him after the incident involving Danzo and immediately he regretting ever saying those words.)

You did well in regretting it

(He scoffed and gazed back over to her. "You actually think I'd do that?" It was a bit offensive, yes, but he was a shitty person in the past so he'd give her that. "Isn't there a way around this.")

WAIT, WAIT, WAIT! Did I just read this correctly? Sasuke... Would never do that to her?... Holy moly *places her hand on her heart* that is like the biggest plot twist in the entire Naruto series. *Hops around while throwing flowers.* Hallelujah *church music plays*

(Both sounded equally terrible in his mind.)

IKR!

(Could she be any more blatant?)

Yes.

(but apparently his own taste in women had changed over the years. He bet his mother was rolling in her grave at this point.)

She is probably rlab in her grave :3 (Rlab equals roll like a buffalo)

Chapter 3: MY LOVE SAKURA-CHAN! Everyone, back off *sweep the floor from the dust* my queen is here so bow down biches.

itachi Uchiha ?

I think Sasuke and Sakura are being really insensitive towards Karin. Usually I don't even like Karin, but they really are being selfish.

You surely are one talented i wish it would be shikamaru and temari i love the concept though.

Nice story waiting for the next

Huh...well then. Way to be an idiot. Now I have to wait to know :/

Don't forget to mark this as complete!

Great story by the way!

Awww! I loved it! :DDD

Can't wait for the sequel!