What anime power was John exibiting in chapter 5?

I'll adopt your story and have John killed off in the most gruesome fashion I can think of, but right before he dies I'll have Tsukune NTR his ass with Kurumu who'll be begging for it since she's always into Tsukune.

U do know that John will be her slave if kissed under love charm right it even states that in the anime just saying. All in all thought this story is good but I don't like how john is just a rip off of soul from soul eater I know you could've made him a way better monster and not a weapon you even added soul eater terms in your story but like I said I like this story also I rarely see any do the pair u did to your oc and for you a good job

Nobody gives a fuck about a rewrite or this one other than your oc boyfriends tossing your salad.

Just what we need... another OC Rosario fic where Moka falls for the Gary Stu / self-insert.
Yeah, sorry. I can't read this any further. And if a TRUE Rosario Vampire fan likes this sort of OC / self-insert / Gary Stu story, they need to reevaluate their loyalty to the canon of Rosario Vampire.

Sorry...

bout time...

You should have based it on the manga. The whole 'kiss the succubus and you are her slave thing' never really existed in that. They just put it in the anime to convey a sense of urgency about the Kurumu situation.

Dude I liked it right up till you took easy way out and made your Oc exactly like souls power u could have tried. To change of the scythe a little because exact copie of souls power down to look is lame

Johnxinner moka

Great so far dude, can't wait for the next chapter!

I really love this story! Please don't abandon it. I think an OCxKurumu pairing is better that TsukunexMoka

I quite like this fic, and hope you update, don't pay attention to the haters, there just trolls/assholes with nothing better to do.

update please

Wow... another cliche OC fanfiction... boring...

This is complete shit