| Reviews for Kingdom cut scenes |
|---|
  xOLqs chapter 1 . 9/4/2018 Veri n1c3VRjst0riId |
| a kingdom fan chapter 3 . 7/5/2017 ok, i read the other two. Forgett sweet, this is Gold! I love Ouhon in these. We Need more, if you have the time please. :) |
| a kingdom fan chapter 1 . 7/5/2017 This is sweet. . I always wondered if Shin could write, or read. He couldnt do it at the beginning of the series, i truly hope he can now. _" |
 Cre8ivBookworm chapter 3 . 5/22/2016 This made me chuckle |
| Deidara chapter 3 . 12/25/2015 Hahah, this is pretty funny. It would be nice if you also wrote a scene with Sei and Shin. After all, their friendship is surely the strongest in the story! I won't suggest any particular scene as there are many to work with, from the funny one where Sei hands him a sword in the awarding ceremony to the most serious ones, like when Sei lends Shin a shoulder before the battle of Sai... |
| makesomehassel chapter 3 . 10/2/2015 wooow it's really good keep it up |
| sayume214 chapter 2 . 9/14/2015 I SOOO want to see OuHon and Shin going shopping together now. XD I absolutely love this story's scenes. The friendship is awesome. |
| sayume214 chapter 3 . 9/14/2015 I totally wanna see OuHon trying to fight Kyokai. His frustrated face when he fails miserably would be precious |
| okashira janet chapter 3 . 9/12/2015 Pretty :) |
| Silver Hydrangea chapter 3 . 9/8/2015 Lol, I just love Kyoukai! Her reaction is just so her hahaha. I can really imagine her saying that she doesn't have to worried. More please! I enjoy this a lot |
| PrimedBlade141 chapter 2 . 8/10/2015 Fun. Shin is such a baka... |
| PrimedBlade141 chapter 1 . 8/10/2015 lol nobody can resist Ten. |
| VeraVera chapter 1 . 12/6/2014 As for anymore scenes, how about more ouhon & Shin moments? Shins hot bloodedness and Ouhons way of saying the very thing that makes shin explode is pretty frickin hilarious! Id loved to see more of that, maybe moutens & ouhons reaction to kyou kai being a girl? Maybe scenes between the chu commanders, if you've read that far in the manga. But mainly I wana see ouhon in a awkward scene LOL like mouten creeping him bathing or something, or perhaps an interaction with an attendant in the Wang estate... but for that you'd need to do an OC insert which is challenging but clearly your writings really good & you should be up for the challenge! You havent updated this in so long.. PLEASE DO. I love this! |
| VeraVera chapter 2 . 11/24/2014 I love this! This chapter especially the animosity between Ouhon and Shin is just too funny & there you have lil ol Mouten being a nice little settler! I would so love to read more moments like this, I just love them especially shins dumbness omg. Great fic :) keep going! |
| baozito3 chapter 1 . 7/10/2014 This is good! You've kept the characters in perfect character. Please write more! |
