.CUTE! I loved it so much. I was crying

They get together and get married raise children?

Wonderful...completely brilliant...keep up the great work...thank you

Ah man, this was awesome, very good! Kenlos are so cute together in this story! :)

OMG I LOVED THIS! The whole story I thought Carlos was going to die and when he didnt I was like YES! This was a brilliant story and I just can't get over the fact of how sweet it is! This story was written very well and props to you! Once again I say LOVED IT!

loved it

GAH! That was so beautiful and now I don't know exactly what I'm feeling but I know for sure happiness is in there XD And the extra Jagan totally didn't hurt anything either ;) Oh man, I really loved this :D

awww I love this fic. well done

This was absolutely beautiful. I especially loved the ending where Javi caught them. Did you know that was really Carlos' brothers name or did it just come to you? :)

except for one "Mark loves to laugh and he does so easily and infectiously." in the middle - i say - PERFECTION! loved your story! well done! *que the standing ovations*

WOAH! Completely different from the other stories on this site! Great job!

I think that this was a very sweet story. It certainly was heart tugging. The element of the story that I liked the most was the dynamics between the characters. I know that this type of long shots take a very long time to do and I really appreciate that you are willing to share this story with us. Thank you. It was a beautiful story

I hope to read more stories from you in the future, this was beautiful, I really loved it.

First of all, this is just absolutely great, I've never seen much of Carlos and Kendall's relationship on BTR, bit this has really opened up my eyes. I see Kenlos every where now! Thank you, this was beautiful

Is there going to be another chapter or is this it? Because I really loved it. It's so...goooooood.