Nice

So Sad :( but it's interesting to have a POV Miranda. I think you respect the character very well.

This story was amazing. It her had such a chilling feel to it that was truly interesting to read.

This is a fascinating idea. I have never thought of Miranda's abilities in that light, even though all this here is, is like making positive numbers out of negatives. Very fascinating indeed. But then again, most things that you write are fascinating. I'm a bit sad that you will keep this as a One Shot, but I suppose one can't have everything. xd
Wonderfully done and I'm looking forward to more of your work. :)

Ah, this was a really interesting idea. It's nice to see Miranda be in the spotlight for once.

If you don't mind, I'd like to offer some (hopefully) constructive opinions:

I feel like that there's a lot of time covered in this, especially since it was originally planned to be a multi-chapter fic. I'd suggest putting white space/line breaks between some of the different sections. It makes it easier on the reader to separate one scene from the other, as well as gives a sense of passing time. Unless you wanted it to all run together as a reflection of Miranda's feelings, I'd split them up a bit.

You send some of the narration and dialogue with hyphen and ellipses combinations (-...). I'd suggest using one or the other since a dash (-) implies an abrupt cutting off, while an ellipses has a sort of trailing off feeling to it.

I'd also adjust the first paragraph a tiny bit since you use the word ruin three times in two sentences, and through off the flow a little bit.

I do really love the concept with this, though, so thanks for the read! Good luck with writing and I'm looking forward to reading what you put out next.

Saaaaaaad!