Go on, please, the story is so good it's a One Piece story that the truth goes beyond everything.

I enjoy the post chapter notes.

Amazing story,i love this kind of storys its just a shame that most of them never reach the part where this type of naruto meet his parents,their conversation would be incredible,minato's and kushina's reaction to their son hating them or being apathetic at best,along with the fact that while they sacrificed their own flesh and blood for strangers(i mean come on they probably only knew 20% of konoha at best),naruto chose himself,becouse the people they chose over their son abusing him,and naruto saying some cold and hard truths to them would be amazing.

Like a i said,its a shame most of this storys are almost never completed,but i really hope you can come back to this some day.

Please continue.

Hello. Just saying I loved what you've made with the story. I am someone studying psychology and was about to write about the behaviour patterns as the reason that Naruto kept acting the way he was. Seems you really know your behavioural analysis. Again, I'm amazed with many things you've done developing even more of the naruto universe. I've got a few wild guesses of what the dojoutsu analysis will reveal. Consider yourself one more fan. I also have some interest in the different kinds of noscive chakra and how you'll explain them. Good Day!

Ahh this is so good I really do hope you keep writing... Although, I do understand If you lost interest

This story is so good and has some common sense~ I love your story and I hope you’ll update with more chapters

Otro trabajo más sin completar, bravo... pendejo!

Hey, Loius, I don't know if stop or is in hiatus this story, but thank you for this six chapters, not only they are that good but you gave me a nem insight to the Naruto lore and for that, you have my respect!

Awesome! This is really good. So, when's the next update author?

Really good Fic overall. Great writing that make reading it flow easily. The work and research put into it show through the story and add to the trame. You have put a lot into fleshing your character and their thought process.
Awaiting hopefully your return on this fic as I really want to read more of it.

Again the research and works you put in your story show themselves.
Really good chapter, oriented more on Naruto's development that will define his fighting style to look more like Doflamingo.

How people take things at face value, the danger of overlooking things or misconceptions.
Kakashi's psych is that of broken child who was entrusted too soon and too fast with a lot of burdens resulting in a broken man who can't sympathise with his students. The gap between them is too large and even then Kakashi in canon never really tried to mend it.
We see Asuma or Kurenai and even Gai spending time with their student outside of training time yet Kakashi never did, prefering letting them to their own. He see the flow in his team dynamics but refuse to do something about it, letting things play out and we have seen how that had ended.
So Another good chapter.

Your approch to fuinjutsu is interesting since it had never really been explained how a few line of ink could hold so much power.
As for his clan symbol I have always questioned how nobody seem to know it yet seen by everyone everyday on their uniform.
I can understand a cover up by erasing the existance in books and records but keeping the symbol in plain view on their uniform and not telling why it is here and nobody is asking why?

Hmm, Naruto's reaction to Jiraiya is well depicted. I've always wondered how he could be so accepting from a total stranger in canon. Jiraiya's priority are pretty defined, the man hasn't been in the village in years, possess a numbers of important informations (Akatsuki and Orochimaru), a godson he had all but forgotten, and instead of reporting to his sensei or make a decent first contact with Naruto, the man is more interested in his lust.