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fucking fantastic man just straight up awesome

This was amazing!

Well i love your storyy

oooooo very interesting!

THIS WAS STUNNING, OMG. the way you write is amazing- it almost sounds like poetry. the ending was so sweet too! also, i'm a sucker for juvia and gajeel bromance as well as gruvia, so this was incredibly fun to read. your english was perfect! you speak it better than i can, and it's my first language, hehe. keep up the great work!

So cute. :)

Awesome! This is very good and the idea is excellent!

it's perfect as it is...though some words you misused was a little frustrating...i absolutely love this piece...thank you

I really enjoyed this. Ancient Rome is an interesting concept to use as the basis for an AU since its pretty uncommon

genial el one-shot, me encanta lo del tiempo de guerra, con las tunicas, y el estilo de gladiadores, genial, pero como dijiste hay cosas que cortaste, me parece que podrias hacer otro capitulo desarrollando un poco mas la relacion entre Gray y Juvia, para saber mas del pasado de Gray :), el pov de tercer persona hablando de Juvia, es genial, en mi opinion es el mas explicativo (es el q mas me gusta :P) asi que podrias pensarte en hacer uno mas ;) una vez mas me encanto el one-shot

Absolutely loved it! 3

*sob* *sob* This is beautiful TT
I love how you potrayed Juvia, Gray and Gajeel's characters. This is wonderful.
If you can wrote this good when you're not in your right mind; I wonder how excellent you can be in your right mind.
Maybe I just asking too much if I want these two to be together? Not too much scene...maybe an epilogue...

Gurl what you talking about this was beautiful. I loved it. Good job on this one. I saw a few minor spelling/grammar errors (you'll have to forgive me for not listing them as I'm on my phone) but you did an overall good job on this! The plot was fab and the narration was a!

i liked this one quite a lot and i dunno, i kinda want a sequel? this was over-all really good but i did find a few mistakes like instead of "ran" you put in "run" and "mist" instead of "midst"