the scene where Remy falls for Rogue... where? I didn't see Remy falling for her in this at all... it's Rogue who fell for him but thinks he doesn't love her

Wow... that was perfect. Loved the imagery this painted.

This is just perfect!

Whoa, gut punch, right there. No wonder he fell for her right then. I kinda did, too.

Que lindo!

Love it! As a smut writer myself, I enjoyed the innocent attraction in this story. I was right... You write well and I've become a fan.

Btw, couldn't have found a more appropriate hook- this was short and sweet (and to the point.)

swoon

Lovely... Almost a prelude to something more - in more ways than one. ;) It makes me wish that there was more to read, more to see... It's compelling in its simplicity, telling everything that needs to be told in a few short words and some starkly beautiful images. I like how you present the first moment of Remy's falling in love with her without him ever saying so, without the word 'love' ever having to be mentioned... it just makes sense in the context of what you've written here that he would do so. :) In other words, this was an absolutely beautiful piece to read and I'm looking forward to reading more from you. :)

-Ludi x

Aww. cute :)

Ouch... Oh my heart hurts... I liked it

I really wish hollywood would recognize the true love between Gambit and Rogue.

You romantic.

Nice i hope there will be more. Love the way she open herself out to him at the end. It just shows how even though some told her and other projected their feelings about Remy she stood her ground and explored it herself.

A very nice oneshot. Good characterization.

That was lovely, romantic for sure with the right amount of realism. And I think you have the couple just right, especially rogue. I always felt her fellow x-men thought gambit was no good for her, but rogue is strong and sassy and always leaves him wanting more, which you wrote perfectly! It was very touching and sweet. Thanks for writing.