Reviews for The Story of the Protector
Mercenary9814 chapter 3 . 10/16/2018
I await the morning.
Guest chapter 3 . 7/12/2017
update soon
Mike Kromer chapter 3 . 7/6/2017
Must have more asap. Love it so far, keep it up. Can't wait to see what happens next. Looks like Ichigo and tatsuki are getting together, wether or not they know it lol. How will she get her answers I wonder.
Guest chapter 2 . 5/9/2017
Please update soon!
Guest chapter 3 . 5/9/2017
Please update!
Dante 101 chapter 2 . 7/19/2015
Ichigo became a Shinigami and went beyond that of a Hollow and Shinigami at the end of the WW. All of that accomplished
in one year. Now that he awakened his powers 6 years sooner... Ichigo is going to be scary as time goes on...
SilverIceRing chapter 3 . 5/25/2015
It is very hard for me to find amazing stories like this. Truly, it is. I have to sift through countless pieces of work, most not even worth a second glance, in order to find gems this awesome.

I mean really, a "genius"/overpowered young Ichigo story (one of my favorite plots), where not only does his mother survive, but where he is growing up with far more balance than ever before (both being incredibly nice plot points)? And that's without even mentioning the cute little crush Tatsuki is developing here, which seems to be growing slowly enough to keep from being boring in the future...

And yet, after all that, all I am left with the harsh truth that this story has not been updated for well over a year, and shows no signs of being pushed forward again?

It is frustrating, to say the least.

Nonetheless, it is still one of the better written stories in the Bleach section of , finished or not. So all I can say is thank you for the treat, and I hope that you one day come back to this one!
Guest chapter 3 . 2/15/2015
Good chapter.
You may have gotten a bit soft with Tatsuki, but I don't mind, and if you didn't do it, knowing Ichigo and Tatsuki's personalities it would take forever for anything to happen between them.
I understand that Sora dying was a needed plot point, but out of curiosity's sake why couldn't Ichigo just use healing kido on him, if it was merely because of everyone's presence in the room they could have just asked them to leave for a moment.
I hope that you haven't abandoned this story and that you update it soon.
Iceflame55 chapter 3 . 2/8/2015
So, a supposed Vasto Lorde, hmmm? Doubtful. From what I've seen, the TRUE Vasto Lordes are given that title by others witnessing their power, and correctly regarding them as a higher being on the food chain. Ripjaw was a bit too... arrogant in his talk. That being said, I'm looking forward to more as soon as you can manage it!
Guest chapter 1 . 1/10/2015
this is awesome you should try to complete your whole fanfiction
Guest chapter 3 . 12/28/2014
Ahahaha, look at that liar hollow! Vasto Lorde's still have full masks. He was probably an incomplete Arrancar or something.
MrNeedsToRemoveAllFavs chapter 1 . 12/21/2014
Sochi does not mean son.

Sochi is device (装置) and measure (措置). They sound like Soh-chee

Yoshi is an adopted son. 養子 Yoh-she

Kaa-san would be an informal way of saying mother, essentially the equivalent of saying "Ma" instead of "Mama" (which would be Kaa-chan for some dialects) or "Mother" (which would be Okaasan) in English. Okaasama (essentially "Beloved Mother") is probably what Ichigo would use at this point in his life.

"was no longer a human"
Well, technically, so long as he doesn't die he's still human. He's just got powers now.
Guest chapter 3 . 11/19/2014
I have one question.

continue?
desdelor97 chapter 3 . 10/20/2014
This was a great chapter. please keep up the great work and please update soon.
IchiIchi chapter 3 . 7/17/2014
Loved it, adored it, I'm everything positive for it! XD great story, love Ichigo's character progression, Masaki's and Tatsuki's, too. His father knows! :0 shiz. XD hope you update c: whenever I read a fantastic piece of literature, I get shivers. Your story is getting close to that xP
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