I really like this: seeing child!Gintoki and inside his head. That he doesn't see himself as Human (kinda like Kintaro who was raised with beasts)
The crows bringing him present is kinda poetic, if terrifying. Crows are death birds and with Gin beeing all white, the color of death, it makes a chilling image. *shiver*
I wonder if present!Gin as the same affinity with birds, could be interesting seeing the reaction it brings to all his little world.
This is great, I loved it!

Beautifully and poetically written :)

:'( I'll give u a home... gin-chan! nice writing btw, totally tore my heart out.