Dang. Kuroko is one obsessed mofo, but I strangely like how you potrayed him here, haha. Uke-Kuro thirst for Akashi is real. They are both in character, I love this. Thank you for writing this, have a good day :)

Kuroko reminded me a lot of Yuno Gasai in this story.

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I really enjoyed your story, thank you for sharing it with the world!

Interesting story.

Madness kuroko tetsuya! Love it so much. Thank you for the story. I always love your works

Wow, well I most definitely was not expecting that. It was a great story, but the ending was so sad! The lime-ish scene was really good. Your writing is just amazing! _ I love the concept you used for this story too, it reminds me of that movie with Jet Li "The One". I love that movie. It also reminded me a little of Mirai Nikki too. _ It took me a while to figure out just who was killing who with the bodies that were randomly put off in the woods or an alleyway or whatever. It made me feel sorry for all the poor Tetsuya's that were killed by that one. That was just cold. Anyway, I really enjoyed this, thank you so much for sharing this awesome one-shot! _ Great job.

Oh...this was beautiful, horrible and exiting and somehow calmly creepy, all in a very, very good way of course. And that ending was...I don't have any words for it. Yes, the plot was really amazing and the writing too.

Ah. He's truly yandere

This, is a pure beauty. Two thumbs up for you, Author!

Your stories are very interesting, a little morbid, but interesting. This kind of Kuroko is unusually captivating. Thanks for the story!

Creepy

Is what I want to say but, I'd like to call it unexpected :))

hi. ;w;
i am sorry i can't comment anything about grammar for i am too, shit with grammar. but i found in tumblr masterlist post that maybe will be helpful. thatfrenchhelper. tumblr post/51759624890/english-grammar-and-vocabulary (remove spaces)
as for the story, it's hauntingly beautiful. i like your choice of diction and the aesthestics of your description. and the yandere kuroko and the captive akashi. i like it all.
please keep writing.

I was slightly confused at first. But then I got more though the story and I was not expecting that ending! Amazing that is what I have to say, I wasn't expecting Kuroko to have a slight dark side about him and that he continuously kills himself in other worlds just to be with Akashi.

I enjoyed reading this. Awesome story that is honestly a bit scary but really really good.