Oh my, i would have loved if this was actually part of the series, it would fit so seamlessly. The random edition of loki is normal considering the series haha, but I can definitely chalk this up as one of my favorite fanfics by far.

Wow, this was amazing! I loved Loki's appearance and the phone call with Sigrun. Thanks for sharing!

this story was great for a moment i thought i was reading a book fro the author that's how well written and true to character it was. thank you for writing it i enjoyed reading it.

I really like how this turned out and how you kept his streak of protection strong. I seriously thought that this was going to be more of a tug of war with Daniel where he either broke them up or she broke him. I'm really glad it wasn't, I like this so much better!

Haven't read any Dresden fanfic in a while. Glad I found yours. Terrific story and sailing on my favorite ship. Well done and thanks!

I really really Love this Story. Its so beautifully written. Please do a sequel :)

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Great chapter! Think we are in need of a sequel, would love to see what the Norse gods would get up to!

what the heck are those things, gremlins?

i thought that harrys winter knight problems saw murphy as an equal, but you seem to be getting a lot of milage out of the fact that it doesnt, nice drama

you do realise that daniel caprenter is at most half of murphys age right, but hes got just cause to be pissed off at harry: even more so after he has to work with nicodemius in skin game

Really interested in seeing where this goes. :)

Loving your story, especially the Harry/Murphy interactions. Hope you update soon!

Great chapter. Love the Harry/Murphy scenes. I want to see them finally get together in the books. Update soon.

I really like this story - I hope you keep writing.