It took me five hours of uninterrupted reading to finish it. It's a really great story! I really liked the fight scenes in it. The ending surprised me a bit, but I loved it. The marshal and the princess are a combination I will always love

is it finished?i love this story, hope you'll write a new one after frozen 2

My heart, it hurts, and normally, I don't have a heart, but this got me. God, so sad, I just have to re-read this man,so good.

Wow... Just Wow! Absolutely brilliant. Wonderfully written and great detail! Add this to my ever growing list of favorite stories! Thank you for sharing your story.

Holy moly! This is soo interesting! I'm already loving it!

Elsa and Anna are literally the cutest wives ever!

Elsa and Anna are so soft and adorable and i love them so much

Ik it's been 100 years since this story was completed, but still wanna say, this is one of the greatest first meetings I have ever, ever read. Literally, the stuff of fantasies

This story just makes me smile

The little gift Elsa gave Anna is too cute. A little griffin love it

Omg I loved this fic

This was an amazing story. I read the whole thing in 1 day. I wasn't expecting it to be this good, but it was. The end felt like adrupt though. Instead of the trolls it would have been better to show them playing with their kids. With them being practically Immortal you can write a sequel of them in modern day. Good luck and Thank you

I realize that the safest place for Anna is with Elsa, but the King had intended to send her to war. it disturbs me that as soon as all hell breaks loose, his first reaction is "get Anna out of here" when, at the beginning of the story, he said that Anna "can take care of herself". Elsa should not have been sent away with Anna, only for them to return shortly after. It just feels like a huge hole in the story, and it is upsetting I feel like Anna's position as Lieutenant is literally pointless when it comes to battle; she's not being given the correct amount of freedom to fight, and being hidden away instead. thank you for writing though, I enjoy these little things when I reada story. excited to continue it..

I actually read this one about a week ago but couldn’t figure out how to review it. But I’ve kept the tab open in hopes of finding the right words to praise it.

But I can’t. So here’s half a review

Brilliant story. It was a joy to read, thank you for sharing.