This is a really good story. Such a amazing job! I had to get tissues twice while reading this. I can tell you took a great amount of time making this, and it really has paid off. After I was done reading the story in one sitting, I immediately told my family and friends about it. It will be a story I will be thinking a lot of for the next few days. 100/10 job on this one. Keep up the great work. ( Even though this was finished 2 or so years ago i still had to comment on this )

It's was such an emotional rollercoaster , but it was worth it in the end.

Thank you so much for writing this story, I binge read all of it

I'm not crying... Who's crying? Definitely not me..

Just wow...

This is an amazing story

I'm speechless

Oh my god! It was AMAZING!
Sorry I Don't speak good English so I do a lot of mistakes. Someone has begun to translate your story in French but only to the chapter 11. But I love so much your story that I wirte your text in 'Word Office' and then I can translate in 'Pons'. It was so long but then I can understand and know how finished your story: Thank you so much! I ship the couple Malec
A french teenager

Man, you almost killed me in the last chapter. Great story btw!
Really rich with emotions and expressions.

Love it.

This honesty made me cry and it was so beautiful and i love it!

I really enjoyed this fic but maybe you should
have someone proof read before you
post, because there are some distracting grammar errors. other than that, loved the story!

This is probably one of the most moving Malec fanfics I have ever read, in chapter 27 I started off the chapter fine thinking that Alec was going to die, I was crying my eyes out to say the least like literal tears falling down my cheeks, I don't cry that often. Then when they're in Paris I started crying again but this time it was tears of happiness bcos it made me so happy that Alec had survived and that Magnus was finally happy, I'm now reading the epilogue and just feeling so happy for them and all they went through in this fanfic and I just wanted to say that this is amazing

Hi! I loved this story and I'm so excited to hear you're rewriting it

I 100% suggest putting it on ao3 this time round- the fandom on there has blown up big time ever since the TV show and almost every work posted gets several hits, kudos and bookmarks. I can see this fic doing really well on there as well!

I've found that it's easier for people to find new works on ao3 too, resulting in more hits on stories and every time it gets bookmarked it gets pushed to the top of bookmarks, so pretty much every time someone bookmark your story or you update a chapter, you get heaps of hits.

Feel free to send me a message on ao3 (my name is frosthawk. Cringe name, I know...) and I can give you sone more info on the difference between posting on here and on ao3! :)

I am so sorry this girl let you down without warning or suggesting someonelse who could help you. I am horrible with drawing... I would have loved exploring a new illustrated version of this story, but I love it anyway and I will read it again the way it is, it is so beautiful ! Thanks for trying and I still hope you'll find Someone! Hope to head you soon :)

Stop with the ' he likes boys' cause it keeps getting me to a imagine little boys that are under ten yrs. Really creepy! Please use guys or men cause hey it's creepy!